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Wednesday, August 31, 2005
 

My Hometown of San Diego, the El Cortez Hotel, and The Flash.


From the Living Room:


"The Adventures of the Flash: Part 1"


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San Diego: the city with a perpetually sunny atmosphere. At night though, there is no sun. At night, the lights of the skyscrapers reflect like little pearls in the bay, the sea side bars fill up with people out to enjoy a cold beer on a lazy evening, and airplanes fall upon the skyscrapers, leaving only the glittering lights of their landing gear and the roar of turbines, as the evidence of their descent.

At the top of a Balboa Park ravine, underneath the landing airplanes, Jay stood and listened to the trees blowing from the wind. His dad stood next to him, holding a fist sized rock. With a quick toss, the rock was thrown into the sewer pipe at their feet. It disappeared into the darkness, and Jay put his ear to the pipe, tuning into the poetry of the receding fall: skip, chunk, twink, piddle.

After the noise had finished, the father handed over a smaller rock. Jay kept it there, a tiny star big enough to fill up his hand, and thought for a moment.

ow did the rocks get here,?the boy asked.

hey were always here.?o:p>

ow do they get back??o:p>

hey don.?o:p>

Across from them, the red neon sign of the El Cortez Hotel burned across the sky. Jay bought his first copy of The Flash comic book from the Hotel newsstand, and he immediately became a fan. Faster than sound, faster than time, even faster than Superman?nothing was faster than The Flash.

Jay threw his rock into the sewer pipe and wished he could run down and catch the rock before it hit the bottom. Jay wished he could run faster than the wind blowing past, faster than the airplanes overhead.

Jay wished he was the Flash.

Somewhere at the bottom of the dark pipe, the rock came to a stop, never to move again.

For many years, Jay had the recurring dream he was just underneath the decaying El Cortez. At the top, just near the neon O, was a small boy. A huge wrecking ball was swinging across the roof, towards the child. Jay ran into the lobby, across the Spanish theme red carpets, and up the stairwell. He ran fast: fast as the wind, fast as light, fast as the Flash.

On the roof, Jay looked down into the city, where the lights were as numerous as the people wandering the streets. He ran over to the child and in dream after dream, before Jay could get there, the wrecking ball knocked the little boy over the side. The nightmare would end with the screams of the falling child still in the air.

Years later, during one of those clear summer nights where the red neon EL CORTEZ shone like a beacon upon the city, it came to occur that Jay father found himself driving past a burning tenement building. He stopped his cab and ran inside, up the smoldering stairs, to a pair of children trapped on an upper floor. The fathers days as a High School track athlete were long since finished, and age had taken away much of his speed. By the time the children were reached, the fire had already covered up any means of escape. He gathered the children into his arms, said a final prayer to God, and jumped out of the window. He sang to the kids during the fall, keeping his back to the ground and his eyes upward, where the stars whispered insufferable promises.

He hit the ground, never to move again, his body protecting the two children.

Skip, chunk, twink, piddle: Jay had been taught by his father about everything but death, and now it was too late to learn about anything else.


End Part One.

Note: part two HERE.

 Posted 8/31/2005 3:15 AM - 92 views - 92 comments

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Interestin', but my favorite superhero is still The Punisher. For obvious reasons.

And yes, I do admit, my takeover of the QCR was a bit childish, but, I think I had to teach Jimmy a lesson for razzing on me so many times with me saying nothing. I'm a vindictive prick some of the time. Well, all of the time, and I just waited and waited.

An online coup, though. Would anyone have seen it coming?

But, I'll take your suggestion into account. Keep on being a bullshit detector, Anatole, it's what you're good at.
Posted 8/30/2005 3:54 AM by Drakonskyr Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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this was a moving piece-sad-but it's good to 'feel'  :) I'm not sure that I like the description using airplanes and skyscrapers together...I do like the subtleness of it. 'how do they get back?'  'they don't'   ...death-maybe the father had taught the boy every thing he needed...

:)

Posted 8/30/2005 4:08 AM by in_conversation - reply

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Nice job.  I'm catching the link so I can add your name to the list.

I do try to respond to comments as much as possible.  When I do an event like this though, alot of time I get so swamped that I don't get a chance to respond to everyone.  My regular site is P8indme.  There, I do make an effort to respond to everyone that leaves me comments...

Thanks for participating!  ~D~

Posted 8/30/2005 4:13 AM by Featured_Grownups - reply

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RYC: Did I detect whining from a really nice looking Flash :P wow!!! Somebody needs bed, like I need coffee...   :)   Good Morning! (curses coffee grounds in coffee) Have a great day!

Posted 8/30/2005 4:19 AM by in_conversation - reply

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Clever story, inspired by actual events, no doubt.  A pleasure.. lending a nice quick read, and a feel for a city I've never been.

RYC: yes, but, didn't you know?...  each fragment then became a new, you.

Posted 8/30/2005 4:56 AM by macastat Xanga Premium Member - reply

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*golfclap*

Well done yet again ol' bean.

Fantastic even.

I still don't get why the Flash kept fighting super smart gorillas.

+25 ninja tokenz

Posted 8/30/2005 5:11 AM by skuzzymcskuzz - reply

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I really enjoyed this piece.
Posted 8/30/2005 5:35 AM by Viewtiful_Justin Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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I'd be flattered if someone did that to me!

Then again, I'm just weird.

Posted 8/30/2005 5:45 AM by NumberOne_Zero - reply

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I liked that you wrote a story to go along with description of San Diego.
Posted 8/30/2005 5:46 AM by shafftrac - reply

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That's a good story and a damn nice picture.

That makes sense, Pam Anderson called here for you.. do these things re-route? Did Juliana Ma call YOUR house??

Posted 8/30/2005 6:26 AM by Mishuko - reply

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nice...looking forward to part 2.
Posted 8/30/2005 6:36 AM by hmmCJ - reply

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good....
Posted 8/30/2005 6:43 AM by paradise_kiss584520 - reply

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i am a sucker for good photo of skyline...waiting for part 2...what happens when girls wait..? lolol :)
Posted 8/30/2005 6:55 AM by meikaili - reply

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Gah!  I messed up your  link on the list.  Fixing it now, I'm sooo sorry!  ~D~
Posted 8/30/2005 7:12 AM by Featured_Grownups - reply

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thanks and kinda like that little pic you used wow can see the guy and without the glasses you don't look like you are from the x-files....lol though not that, that is a bad thing on the contrary...sometimes my life is straight from another planet...haven't figured which one yet....katie
Posted 8/30/2005 7:16 AM by meikaili - reply

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Nice write.  I love your zoo.  Poway's a nice little town, too.  Greetings, San Diego (home of the 2004 National Scrabble Championships), from Vero Beach, "Where The Tropics Begin."
Posted 8/30/2005 7:19 AM by twoberry Xanga True Member Xanga Lifetime Member - reply

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This was an awesome post...love the way you tied the story into the Hometown theme!  I am also looking forward to part 2, you had me engrossed.  ~D~
Posted 8/30/2005 7:24 AM by p8indme - reply

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Oh my, I spent my summer making mistakes. but having fun with it.
Posted 8/30/2005 7:46 AM by PyRomance - reply

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Okay...now, I am going to have to come back to read Part 2! Very good story, so far!

Great post...love the pics!

Posted 8/30/2005 7:52 AM by maggi65 - reply

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*wipes tear from eye* Moving story. I look forward to the next installment.

Posted 8/30/2005 8:01 AM by Shahrazad1973 Xanga Premium Member - reply

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tightly woven together- masterly done!
Posted 8/30/2005 8:26 AM by jerjonji Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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fab ending... perhaps he got to be the Flash at the end...
Posted 8/30/2005 8:41 AM by DreamsontheShelf - reply

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Great stuff... but the Flash is no Batman.

BE blessed!
Steve
Posted 8/30/2005 8:46 AM by mourning2dancing Xanga True Member - reply

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RYN, I'd like to think we are the homo superiors.

*hands you a banana*

~ X

Posted 8/30/2005 9:00 AM by XINERGY Xanga True Member Xanga Lifetime Member - reply

The moment when the father jumps, back against the ground..  I felt it!  I really liked it.

ryc:  Every day?  Wow, time constraints won't let me do that.  It's a luxury.

Posted 8/30/2005 9:30 AM by Anonymous - reply

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