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Original: 5/13/2008 10:38 PM
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Tuesday, May 13, 2008
 

Despair is Far More Glamorous

I asked the tree to save me,
To take me in gnarled branches and remind me about simplicity.
He said, “Put on your gas mask honey,”
ChemLawn came through yesterday.
I painted his leaves with my fingertips,
Because he said my eyes were like watercolor,
And I could do anything I wanted.

 

I hung bells from his branches,
And we imagined he was from India.
But when I tried to put a red dot on his trunk,
I guess I was being racist,
And he stopped talking to me.

 

Maybe it was really because I stopped drinking,
And when I get mad I just write instead.
My poetry on the backs of receipts,
And in the margins of textbooks for someone else to find.

 

It’s not fair to look for happiness,
Only to find that you’re only happy when you’re looking for it.
You’ll never be happy again.

 

You’re welcome.

 

 Posted 5/13/2008 10:38 PM - 12 comments

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I would cut that tree down if it talked to you. It's probably possessed by Satan.
Posted 5/13/2008 11:33 PM by UR_MUSE Xanga True Member - reply

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I got a good chuckle out of this. I don't know if that's what you were going for.
Posted 5/14/2008 12:42 AM by flyfox65 Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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Because he said my eyes were like watercolor,
And I could do anything I wanted.

I really love those lines. As I have said before, your writing as a whole has a wonderful rhythm to it, a swoop and sway with its words that keeps the reader engaged as he or she reads through the almost bizarre motley of words and associations. I admire how you don't give us a straight answer or a direct path, but instead lead us down this beautiful wording and outlandish story of a willing tree and the human compulsion to live an imprint.

Some things don't make sense the first time around, but you wrap up your writing so well with a real sense of truth that it compells me to read it again and again.

Keep up the wonderful work.

Posted 5/14/2008 1:08 AM by By_Mine_Eyes - reply

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This is great.
Posted 5/14/2008 2:32 AM by minuteXmade_quotes - reply

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I was up late reading random xanga posts of ancient subsciptions.

www.xanga.com/mordalwen/615845082/explorations.html

This reminded me of you.
Posted 5/14/2008 5:18 AM by flyfox65 Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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Heh<3
Posted 5/14/2008 10:12 AM by Sayitwell Xanga True Member - reply

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where to write but in recipes and margins of texts. i like that. lol :)
Posted 5/14/2008 11:18 AM by lilopinkie - reply

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You have beautiful thoughts.

How long have you been writing?

Posted 5/14/2008 12:56 PM by Southeast_Beauty Xanga True Member - reply

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:sigh:

There is always this significant element of mystery left in your writing which makes it so unbearably fantastic.

WHEN ARE YOU COMING TO COLUMBIA!!!!!???!?!?
Posted 5/14/2008 3:30 PM by eeb06b - reply

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I have read this three times now. It's perfect.
Posted 5/14/2008 4:31 PM by statisticalanomaly - reply

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Like a child's mind.

Oh, oh you can be Daphne then.

:)

Posted 5/14/2008 5:51 PM by Kitschyen - reply

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Love the hippytasticness.

This is one of my favorites of yours.

Posted 5/14/2008 10:40 PM by Scrittore_di_cielo Xanga True Member - reply


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