So i guess you want to hear about my week. If you don't, sorry! I had a huge American Studies test in which I am still worried about getting back (it might bring down my chances to getting into AP next year!). My alien paper was do, and it was the week of APPLICATIONS.. dun dun dunnn... I wrote my FLIGHT application, L.I.F.E( I HAVE YET TO FINISH!), and Print Media. I am working on my Creative Writing one.. I am going to write the poem on here so you all can read it.. please tell me what you think and if you think i should submit it! Friday night i volunteered at the Gathering Grounds. It was so fun!! I met some cool people and bands. Brad showed up to keep me company so that was fun!! I had fun with Brad and Jon. Jon works alll the time. I feel bad because I NEVER volunteer there. Saturday I worked (i went in an hour late because of my stupid phone breaking in the middle of the nght... phone breaking = no alarm = no waking up= bad mood all day=you don't want to seeee Alexa in a bad mood all day!) haha sorry that was strange.So I cleaned my room on Saturday and then NIkki, Jason, and Brian picked me up and we saw "Hide and Seek". It was pretty good, kinda like A Secret Window.. but it was fun!! We had a good night.. Me and Nikki were on a health fest and we bought all kinds of NASTY fat free crap.. hhaha .. good times! we went in her hot tub and went on a UDF/taco Bell drive at 1 am!!! Then.. we watched The Notebook.. ah! So today, here i am. I went to a Baptism and then came home and worked on my poem.. and of course.. TALKED TO STEVE, who I miss so much! I get to see him Friday and I am looking forward to every second spent with him! YAY!! Man he's hot.Tomorrow I'm visiting Xavier University.. Hopefully I get to see Dimitrius!! I am gonna try to visit Steve too.. actually I am going to! :) YAY! WoW .. I sound peppy. So heres my poem.. please put some input in about it!!! IT would be greatly appreciated!
Unnoticed No More
Why won’t they talk to her? When will she be heard?
She is so alone in the world and without love
Why can’t they see her?
Can she be invisible? This embarrassment is so absurd
Everyone passes her by as she cries
She pours her love to no one
No one cares
Oh, her love to be one of the flies
What does she want? Where is the love?
So many questions, so little answers
Life will soon be over for there is nothing, Oh so null
She is below and they are above
She is quite the tenacious one
But never thrives in anything
The world is spinning by her
Her world is soon to be done
She closes her eyes and tries to think
Does she remember a time when she had a friend?
She goes unnoticed
She takes that one last drink
It is hard to gulp all at one time
It is hard to do in the first place
She rethinks her life and if there is anything left to live for
The sad thing is that this is her idea of a good time
If people just cared for her
If people just stood up for her
If she had just one friend to live for
Oh, that would be just the cure
So look at her once more
Look at what you’re missing
She is a beautiful person inside
For her body is broken, her eyes are sore
Should I submit this to be in Creative Writing next year or is it too depressing? |