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Wednesday, March 05, 2008

  • Act 4 

    Is it beginning to unfold?

    There is such a long way to go

    for years, I could not speak their language.

    And so they spoke mine

    The vinedresser, yes, he is the one who made it so

    You have not seen him here?

    Oh , never you mind

    we will meet him in good time

    But not yet.

    There are witnesses, you see

    Yes, these strong sentinels stand as witnesses to the thorns and briars that tossed their caustic rhetoric

    among tenderlings

    whose very leaves and veinules were so carefully maintained

    to bear the tri quatrain fruit of my Tender’s fame.

    That was when the hands of sustenance

    Were training up new lines of thought in the way they should go

    grafting

    pruning…

    all so gentle and eloquent;

    I did not see it then.

    Such a pity…

    But they did.  The trees saw these seedlings

    change, as the turning of the leaves -

    I who watered with swill and swallowed, allowing the hate-speech to have its way in the undergrowth;

    I broke the tenant farmers’ hearts

    Their elocution meant for mighty oaks

    washed away like so much fertilizer.

    They stood back and saw instead the burrs and nightshade poison flowing freely

    from my intermittent pen  

Tuesday, February 26, 2008

  • Act 3 

    If you want answers, you must ask the life that is planted here.

    They remember

    and can tell you better

    the letters they gave;

    The ones I didn't take.  

    I would sit in their shade

    and formulate equations, raking through the data

    and numbers that couldn't save me.

    And all the while the words,

    in their whispering leaves

    dripped down around me

    like the rain that had so long sustained this place...and mingled with wordless agony

    running down my face.  

    Unheeded 

    Unheard 

    by the lands that bordered my own  

Tuesday, February 19, 2008

  • Here is act 2.  It's been ahwile since I've been on, but there are a few more acts to go.  These entries are cryptic, I know, but I had something very specific in mind back when I wrote them that makes more sense as the acts continue.  I've decided to only make minor alterations.  I'm interested to see what people get out of these, if anything.  I think I had a much harder time expressing the tings in my head when I was younger without using metaphor.  I still err on the enigmatic side, but I've gotten a lot better at expressing these things as God has taught me and healed my heart.  It's amazing what unconditional love will do for someone ;) 

    Act 2

    The wind…let it take you.

    Now mind your step.

    It’s harder to see a garden, but we can still make it out

    Look carefully

    branches lancing toward tortured skies, roots running into earth I hadn’t watered in ages.

    And wind now weaves softly through them.  

    They stand.

    immovable.  

    true.

    Just as they do to this day

    But there were less then.

    And the tenant farmers have all changed since.

    You see, I always knew these trees were set here long before tenant’s hands

    ran over strong branches

    in gratitude

    for sentences that grew so deep from seed,

    keeping their own council,

    unless sharing with those who bore the burden of their tending.

    The tenders knew better than I what secrets they held

                    The poems they wrote for me…

    When the epochs that taught me in their growth rings looked on

     – they do even still, you know -

    Their progeny walked the carefully crafted pathways

    of their commas

    and their paragraphs

    largely unaware of their significance. 

Saturday, February 09, 2008

  • Garden of the Word

    This is a series of shorts I wrote in segments I've called Acts.  I wrote this a couple of years ago and I'm revising it and resurrecting it.  It contains a good deal of symbolism and is entirely metaphorical. 

    Prologue 

    How I write in these days…
    is so unlike what I have done before
    these are days of

    wonders more than I have ever known.
    The wind moves…
    And it is changing me.
    Come;
    Let me show you.

    Act 1

    To what end were we aspiring?
    That would be the first question to ask,
    sitting beneath an apple tree.
    You see, the wind,
    the wind will take us back;

    rolling along the warm earth of well-trodden garden paths,
    Rustling the fronds of the tired lyrics of my short life…
     
    I have plucked words from those tender shoots you see over there
    and words like fruit from muted trees
    who looked on
    as I consumed that
    which I did not create -

    but I am getting ahead of myself

    wait…

    lie back and look up

    See?

    Yes, the that living lattice works its magic on more than just me.
    But this place was not always as you see it now.
    No, it was not always so,

    not so very
    long ago

Friday, February 08, 2008

  • Sealion Woman

    I'm actually listening to a song called Sealion Woman.  I thought she could use a story. And a few plays on words. Google the lyrics and it'll make more sense. 

    She a hard woman

    see her lyin'

    she make her home way down yonder

    some go see her for they problems

    she not one for walkin

    some come home

    she have some kin' o reputation

    some drink her coffee

    she a gambler

    some lose they ever'thin

    she don't sleep none

    some find her good comp'ny

    her rooster don't lie

    some see her for her trouble

    She sang a low kin' o blues

    some folk be her trouble

    she a hard woman

    C-line woman 

    Currently Listening
    Sisters & Brothers (Multichannel Hybrid SACD)
    By Eric Bibb, Rory Block, Maria Muldaur
    Sealion Woman
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