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Well, no one ever reads my crap anyway, so I'm gonna post the first chapter of a story I wrote on here. Please tell me what u think!!!!
Hiroyuki's Fallen Angel
Chapter 1: A New Life
Hiroyuki was taking a joy ride in his brother’s new car. He had just got his permit and couldn’t wait, after all, what his parents don’t know can’t hurt him. Or at least that’s what he thought right before he’s entire life was about to change forever. He saw someone, or something, he couldn’t really tell what it was because it had an odd shape, but he saw it stumble and carry it’s way out of an alley and into the street where it fell over. He immediately stopped the car right before hitting whatever it was.
In complete shock he got out of the car and ran up to the front, but what he saw, shocked him even more. Beautiful ivory feathers flew everywhere. It was like a cloud of fluff. The figure of a young woman was beneath them all. Hiroyuki bent down to clear some of the feathers off her, but he soon made an astonishing discovery. The feathers seemed to be attached to something and after a few minutes, he realised that that something was a wing, her wing.
“What on Earth are you?!” he whispered under his breath to himself.
Thinking that she might be injured, he picked her up and gently laid her in the car. Her silky clothing was slashed up. “But by what?” he wondered. He found himself staring at this other worldly maiden with aww. She was the most incredible thing he had ever seen. He couldn’t believe he’s eyes.
When he got home, he parked the car in the garage and carefully picked the winged creature up in his arms. He sneaked through his house and went up into the attic, his room. He thought that his parents wouldn’t understand, and would probably take her to a science place where she would become some scientists pet ginny pig. He wasn’t about to let that happen to something so exquisite. He laid her down on he’s bed, and made sure she was ok. He went to the kitchen to try to find something she might eat. But he had no idea what to get because she was still unconscious. He finally decided to bring as much as he could possibly carry. He went back to his room and put all the food on a table. He turned around to see her once again. She moved her head a little bit, which caught Hiroyuki’s full attention. His vision was fixated on her, she slowly opened her eyelids and scooted up into a sitting position. Her majestic white wings faded away, she looked completely human, but much prettier.
Hiroyuki only managed to say “uuu... I uuu...”
She looked up just noticing him. She was still trying to identify her surroundings. “Who are you?” she said after a moments delay.
Her voice echoed in Hiroyuki’s ear, it was stunning As if music from a harp. He bowed down on one knee and said “I am Hiroyuki, you may call me Yuki if you wish.”
“Ok, I am...” she suddenly stopped.
“What is it?” he asked.
“I don’t know. I can’t remember who I am, or anything for that matter.” she replied.
Hiroyuki looked straight into her eyes, he sat on the bed next to her and put his hand on her shoulder. She realised that she had nowhere to go and had no idea where she was. Hiroyuki could see this in her eyes.
“Stay here... I’ll take care of you.” he whispered to her.
“I don’t even know who I am...” was all she managed to get out.
She looked down with tears in her eyes. Some thing on her neck sparkled. Hiroyuki lifted her head up, it was a necklace. On it, there was an insignia, on the back of it, it said ‘Yoriko.’
“Yoriko” he said softly, “That must be your name.”
“Oh! But now what? Where can I go?”
“I told you,” he smiled “You can stay here if you like.”
She smiled back and hugged him “Thanki!!”
“But my parents and siblings can’t find out ok?”
Yoriko “ok” she nodded her head.
The two started feasting on all that he had brought. But they soon found this meal rather solemn. What was there to talk about? She knew nothing, where as he felt to small for his cloths. ‘An angel! A beautiful angel that had descended to Earth!’ He had no idea what to do, so afraid that he might offend her. He worshipped the very floor she walked on. When she felt that anything she would say would sound idiotic and dumbfounded. What where they to do with themselves?
Yoriko grew tired, it was nearly twelve o’ clock at night, she was so weary that she had fallen asleep where she sat. Hiroyuki carried her over to the bed and made sure she was comfortable. He took a single pillow for himself and curled up onto the floor. It was hard to fall asleep at first, but thinking of everything that had happened, he soon found himself in a deep sleep. What he dreamed about, one can only imagine.
It wasn’t until several hours later till he awoke. As he rolled over, he realised that sometime during the night Yoriko had got up and curled up with him. She was fast asleep holding on to him tightly. “Just a few minutes more wouldn’t hurt.” he thought to himself as he went back to sleep.
About an hour later he heard his mom yelling at him to wake up, he looked over, and apparently this had woken up Yoriko too.
“You’re going to be late again!” his mom yelled.
“Oh no! I fell back asleep!” He quickly got up and was about to change into his school uniform when he realised that Yoriko was still in there with him. “Oh man! What am I going to do with you? Maybe I should of thought this out first.” He went into his closet and quickly changed his cloths. Just before running out the door to go to school, he looked back at Yoriko “Stay here and be a good girl while I’m gone ok?” and rushed out.
Yoriko “Good girl?”
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When he arrived at school he was a mess, he had just barely made it before the bell rang.
“Did you get dressed in a closet or something?” some random dude yelled at him.
He had just barely got through the day without having a panic attack. School was finally out, and he could go home. As he walked back home, he passed a clothing shop. Remembering that Yoriko’s cloths had been horribly shredded, and that those where probably the only cloths she owned, he thought he should buy her some outfits to wear. He looked around forever, but of course, had no idea what size cloths she wore. He grabbed a dozen things that said small and ‘one size fits most’ and bought them. He then resumed his walk back home. As he got there, he noticed that all the cars where gone, nobody was home. He went right in and found Yoriko sitting on the living room couch with her wings spread out. Her shredded cloths where practically falling off her body and there where feathers everywhere.
“Ack! What are you doing down here! What if someone comes in?!”
She turned her head and saw him. “Everybody left. I... got hungry.” She looked down, she had felt horrible for disobeying his commands after he had been so nice to her.
“O, I’m sorry. I was in such a rush, I hadn’t realised I left you here all alone with nothing to do. This is my fault. I’m sorry.”
“Look!” Yoriko pointed outside at a bird, she ran out the front door to catch it.
“huh? What are you doing?” he ran out after her, but she was no where to be seen.
“Look! It’s so pretty!”-Yoriko
Hiroyuki looked up and saw her up in the highest tree holding a bird in her hands. “How did you get way up there so fast?”
“I flew! What else?” Was her only reply.
“What?” He looked back at her and was horrified to see that she was about to jump off “Wait! no!” but it was too late, she had jumped, she plunged through the air but just before she hit, her wings raised up and gently guided her to the ground.
“See! Isn’t it pretty!” She held up the bird to show him.
Hiroyuki on the other hand, almost fainted of shock.
Yoriko looked inside and saw all things that Hiroyuki had bought her. “aw! Is that all for me?!” acting like a little kid she ran back inside and looked at all her new cloths and started trying them all on. Meanwhile Hiroyuki is trying to close his eyes as he is holding the bird that Yoriko has just claimed as her new pet.
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And you think you’re life is hectic.
Hope you liked the first chapi! It took me forever to write it. T-T | | | Posted 4/17/2005 4:36 PM - 1 view - 0 comments
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