Okay, I started the book in Detroit and I'll probably finish it in Detroit. My goodness. I was havin' such bad writer's block. I couldn't think of a thing to write.... And then I went to Detroit again, and this is what came up:
Chapter 7 (sorry, I still have nothing but a start to chapter 4 and 5)
The moment Angel walked into the door, she fell on her bed and closed her eyes, remembering the perfect night she just had.
She hadn’t been laying on the bed more that a minute when the phone rang.
“What do you want?” She spoke into the receiver, playfully.
“To know how it went.” Tony’s soothing voice washed over her like the soft caress of a full moon. She couldn’t stop smiling as she explained her night with Danny.
He said the hated phrase to her—“Told you so”—and bid her an awesome night.
She went to the kitchen and made herself coffee. She didn’t know why, but she wasn’t out to justify her actions. She didn’t believe caffeine kept her up or gave her extra energy.
Besides, she was cold. Angel was always cold, no matter the weather. She wrapped her hands around her hot coffee mug and let them be warmed up from palm to back. She sipped the warm, thick liquid and she felt it drift down to her stomach, and she smiled contently as she felt the frost being lifted from her fingers.
She made her way to her bedroom and cracked the window open slightly. She felt as if sleeping beneath the window pouring fresh air in would rejuvenate her more fully during the night.
Pulling her sheet and comforter over her cold body, she had a bout of insomnia. She was exhausted, but she couldn’t quiet her mind. The mystery man ordeal was entertaining to her.
Finally, she decided to take a sedative and was asleep within twenty minutes.
Suddenly, Angel was pulled from her sleep. A crash startled her. She was awake immediately, sitting up in bed, listening intently. Since she'd been dreaming of Josh Groban when she'd been abruptly, but did not consent happily, awoken, she didn't know from where in the house the sound had registered.
She waited.
No further sounds.
Unconvinced, she reached toward the nightstand. She slowly opened the drawer, reaching for her P-32 semi-automatic pistol.
The door skidded open, and she loathed the sound as soon as it began, and if she hadn't been listening past the faint retching sound, she wouldn't have heard the soft click of a closing door.
Angel's hearing was so acute that at times she couldn't believe she wasn't kept awake at night by the sound of the breeze rolling across the bricks on the outside of the house.
At first, she heard the sound come from the hall, the study door closing, but as she gripped the pistol's cold steel, her head spun in revelation. She had given her hearing too much credit. The sound had come from the master bathroom, not ten feet away from the side of the bed.
She bolted out of bed into a shooter's stance, terribly unnerved by the thought of someone being so close without her knowledge.
What did they want? she wondered silently. Was he a robber? Did he have intent to harm me? Well, think genius. If he wanted to hurt you, he would have while you were sleeping, dreaming about Josh.
Oh, that bastard.
She stood behind the bathroom door, listening intently, ear pressed against the wood, eyes tightly shut to alter her sense of hearing more prominently.
She didn't want to open the door. She wasn't afraid, but slightly unnerved and it was much safer just not knowing. But, quietly, she twisted the knob and waited a second. She took a deep breath and threw open the door and her gun hand drew itself up almost automatically.
No one.
Not even a mouse.
She crossed through the doorframe, over the threshold.
A faint breeze startled her. She almost chuckled at herself, but repressed the urge, afraid to make a sound. She didn't want to mask another sound as the nightstand drawer had.
She saw a small mirror in the sink. Not a crash, but a clatter. She looked to the open window above the sink. No figure loomed in it.
Pressure, she thought, air pressure. That's what closed the door.
She didn't remembering opening the window at any point during the previous day, but she had often done things she couldn't remember doing and was finished battling out her forgetfulness. Too often, she'd lost the battles.
She moved the mirror back to its original placement, balanced on the back of the sink against the wall and closed the window, flustered.
She felt an eerie presence and closed the bathroom door, only now feeling safe enough to switch on the light. The bulb sputtered on.
She wasn't stupid, just indecisive. She knew that if air pressure closed the door it would have sounded louder than the soft tink that it had expelled. Also, the closing of the door was too timely. It was covered by the sound of the nightstand which was not just a coincidence. Plus, the door wasn't weightless. It was flimsy on the hinges and heavy, and the rug on the floor beneath it was too plush for the door to have closed by itself unless there was a hurricane.
She decided, ignoring the awareness of another being somewhere in the house that as long as she's up, she might as well.
She relieved herself, and as soon as she had sat down she felt terribly vulnerable. She willed herself to hurry, the feeling of the company tugging endlessly at the back of her mind, becoming too hard to ignore.
She jumped off the toilet before even pulling up her panties, and she stumbled on the thick rug, and engaged the lock by pushing the button in the middle of the doorknob.
She backed away from the door and now took the time to pull up her panties and flush. She praised modern technology, be it only a mere toilet. It flushed fast, virtually noiseless and it took less than fifteen seconds to replenish the water supply, leaving ample time for her to listen for noises outside the bathroom, of which there were many. Someone was moving through the bedroom, drawing nearer. She turned on the faucet, pretending to wash her hands, but instead did the same thing as she had only moments ago on the other side of the door. She pressed her ear hard against it and closed her eyes.
The dry sound of wood scraping on wood. The nightstand drawer.
Footsteps.
Nothing.
Suddenly, she felt someone on the other side of the door, only an inch of wood blocking her ear from being pressed against his.
She knew it was a boy. He was loud, clumsy, and genuinely not cautious at all. Also, it seemed like no one in the world pulled a brake-and-enter these days unless they were acquainted with the victim. Angel didn't ever talk to other women, sans Tony's boyfriend, Jessica, and some friends she had left behind in Wisconsin when she left for college.
Though she sometimes hated being one of the guys, she hated more a group of insecure women, willing- eager to let her into their ten year (or more) long friendship filled with inside jokes, girlish jargon, and long late-night phone calls that end with promises of fun filled times. Angel could hardly contain her excitement.
She hated the phone anyway, but now, as her gaze was pulled down by movement, she wished she had access to the digits 911.
The doorknob was slowly turning and Angel backed away from the door until she softly bumped into the sink, rattling the mirror.
She eyed the sink.
She had been washing her hands an awful long time.
She knew she wasn't fooling anyone, especially not herself because she was on to her own charade. Maybe, if she just acted normally, he'd... disappear.
She shut off the sink and the turning of the knob became more intense.
He jiggled the knob back and forth, obviously aware that she was aware of him, because he wasn't putting forth much of an effort to be discreet.
Now she let her emotions run free and she was scared.
The jiggling stopped, ad he left. She heard the front door close.
She immediately exited the bathroom, intuition telling her that his leaving wasn't staged and he wasn't actually huddling in the darkest corner of the living room.
"Who the hell?" She asked aloud, almost demanding God to answer her.
Why would he give up trying to enter the bathroom and then just leave? Would he have done anything if he had been able to get into the bathroom?
Something told her no, and that he wouldn't have come in even if the door had been unlocked. If he wanted in, all he had to do was insert an object about the size of a bobby pin through the other side of the hole in the center of the doorknob, apply slight pressure and pop the lock out of place. She often played this game as child, utterly fascinated with the simplicity of the lock.
She twisted the deadbolt on the front door, twisted the lock in the middle of the knob, and latched the chain across the door and onto the wall.
Had she carelessly left the front door unlocked?
She couldn't remember, and lost another battle.
"Damn."
And some time... in this frenzy of chapters being COMPLETELY out of order on here... I'll post chapter 4 and 5.
P.S. Once I have chapters 4 and 5 finished... I'm going to switch accounts to JohnMayerLover and then put the chatpers in ORDER on there and use that one from now on.  |