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Wednesday, May 07, 2008
 

When it comes to proofreading, the red penis your friend.

Most times I avoid blogging because I don't like to think about some things in my life.  Sometimes I feel stupid for posting certain blogs because after re-reading them, I realize how emotional I was when I wrote them. 

So, so!  We got our new groups in Media Academy awhile ago.  After the first major project of the year, our teachers allow us to request people to be in our groups.  I didn't turn in one of those slips because I wanted to be surprised.  I had regretted not turning in one of those slips but I'm more satisfied with my new group now.  And this is the poem we chose:

Affirmation by Donald Hall

To grow old is to lose everything.
Aging, everybody knows it.
Even when we are young,
we glimpse it sometimes, and nod our heads
when a grandfather dies.
Then we row for years on the midsummer
pond, ignorant and content.  But a marriage,
that began without harm, scatters
into debris on the shore,
and a friend from school drops
cold on a rocky strand.
If a new love carries us
past middle age, our wife will die
at her strongest and most beautiful.
New women come and go.  All go.
The pretty lover who announces
that she is temporary
is temporary.  The bold woman,
middle-aged against our old age,
sinks under an anxiety she cannot withstand.
Another friend of decades estranges himself
in words that pollute thirty years.
Let us stifle under mud at the pond's edge
and affirm that it is fitting
and delicious to lose everything.

I was so proud that I was able to pick up on the water motif.

My English teacher, Ms. Thurston, played this poem for us at school today.  It's called The the impotence of proofreading by Taylor Mali.  Listen to it.


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hahah i couldnt believe you actually was talking about a penis.
good thing i re-read! :P

that's good that you like your group :]
makes me happy when you're happy.
and that's not just a bunch of bullcrap ;D
Posted 5/8/2008 7:46 PM by aznphannie - reply

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Hahaha thanks Jenny!! It sure means a lot ;) a red penis??

So how's those ap tests of yours? You had 4 so I'm sure you pretty much went through hell with each one.
Posted 5/16/2008 4:18 PM by atomicwedgieboy1 - reply


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