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Original: 11/2/2001 5:43 PM

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Friday, November 02, 2001
 

This is a story, originally written by Mysticalraine. We spoke recently about collaborating on a piece and the result is the first part of the story below. Her original title, was "The Love of a slave, for her Master"

She sat alone, nude, kneeling in the corner of the cold kitchen floor, waiting to be called to him. The frigid air that crept in beneath the unsealed door caused her to shiver intermittently, but she did her best to remain quite still. At times she tried to occupy her mind by listening to the drone of the television in the front room, but even that could not push away the guilt she felt. She knew she had been wrong and accepted her punishment. Of course she could have moved earlier while he was at work, could have gotten up and done whatever she wished...but the love she felt for him bound her to this corner as surely as if she was physically chained to a stake in the floor.

Her stomach rumbled again, and she mentally willed it to hush. She had not eaten all day and the pangs were beginning to escalate in strength. To add insult to injury her bladder was full, and the cramping would soon overwhelm the limits of her ability to remain completely silent. But she understood how she had come to be in this position, and she would would make no noise or complain...she deserved this for talking back to him this morning before he left for work. She hadn't meant to, at this point she was unsure of why it had even happened, yet this morning when the impulse had come over her she had been certain of her feelings. Maybe it was the newly falling snow. She had loved snowfall since she was a small child, the gently cascading flakes and the soft blanket of fresh color that accompanied the dawn of winter. When her Master had forbidden her to stand at the window and watch its arrival, the angry words had burst forth from her throat before she could reign them in. The consequences of her actions were immediately apparent on his face, and now, kneeling in the corner hours later, she mourned missing the sight of the first heavy snow of the season.

"Come here" he called finally from the other room, bringing a small satisfied smile to her lips. She willed herself to stand, trying to ignore the shooting pains that blanketed her legs and the stiffness which fought her every inch of the way. The hours on the floor had left her lower body icy cold and when she finally righted herself it was all she could do to make it to the entrance of the living room. Once there, her battle with her knees was lost and she dropped helplessly back down to a kneeling position just within his sight. She quietly hung her head and remained there in the doorway waiting for him to allow her to speak. As the minutes passed, it seemed her bladder would burst any moment, and she could feel the tears well in her eyes from the residual pain in her legs, but still...she made no sound. Lost in her own thoughts she was surprised when she felt his fingers on her chin, and as he pulled her head up, looking deeply into her eyes, she was reminded of the depth of the love she felt for him. She had not heard him get up, or cross the room to her side, but his touch alone, wiped away the pain of kneeling in an instant. Gently caressing her cheek, he leaned over and softly kissed her lips. When his mouth met hers, any possible regret she had for coming to him was lost.

"Go shower and clean yourself up pet," he said, "The warm water will take away your stiffness." As he said this he reached a hand down to help her up, and she gratefully grasped it, using it to pull her uncooperative aching body to a standing position. "Thank you Master," was all she could summon as she gently massaged her thighs trying to stimulate enough blood flow to make it to the bathroom on her own. While she did this she could feel his eyes wandering over her naked body, and she smiled privately inside. Making him happy was all she ever wanted and she knew he enjoyed the way she looked.

The shower and the use of the bathroom was the answer to a prayer, and when she emerged thirty minutes later she felt better than she had all day. Almost like she was a new person. The house seemed cold after the warmth of the shower, but once she was dry it did not seem as bad. Knowing she had been gone a long time, she left the bathroom and went back to the living room, dropping softly to her knees in front of him, her face covered by the fragrant curtain of her still damp long hair. She remained there for quite some time, head bowed and silent before he finally spoke to her. When he did the order was both a surprise and a delight.

"Go look out the window my pet."

Quickly saying "Yes master," she stood and walked to the window. The mantle of deep snow that covered the yard was a joy to behold and her heart sang with the sight of it. The window radiated cold but she hardly noticed as her eyes swept over the landscape she had been yearning to see all day.

"Snow....I have never known another person who could get as excited by watching the miserable stuff as you can pet."

She turned to face him, beaming her delight as she explained... "It’s the peace I see in it Master, the renewal of life."

He only grimaced and motioned for her to return to his side. She went to him, reluctantly leaving the windowpane and was starting to kneel when he leaned forward and pulled her onto his lap. He began to rub her still too sore legs and she leaned her head back, letting her hair fall across his shoulder as she closed her eyes to savor the essence of his touch.

"Did you miss me today my pet?" he asked, as his hands availed themselves of the top of her thighs. "Yes Master, very much," she said truthfully, loving these quiet moments when all of his attention was turned her way. He smiled at her answer and kissed her lightly on the lips.

"I have a surprise for you tonight, very soon in fact. One that I know you will enjoy very much."

She looked into his eyes searching for any hint of what he might be alluding to, and finding no answer there simply said..."Oh I love surprises Master, you know that!" His smile broadened, sending a slight chill through her naked frame and he eased her off his lap....taking her hand and heading for the basement. She knew what was in the basement, and wondered what he had in mind, but she also knew she would find out soon enough.

The air of the basement stairwell was even colder than the living room, and her nipples rose at the frigid caress as they descended the steps. When they reached the bottom he motioned her to the padded cross that took up the whole southern corner of the room. She obeyed, walking to the cross, which was really a giant padded X and placing her hands above her head so they could be easily buckled into the leather cuffs that were built into the instrument. He pressed against her as her fastened her hands into place, and she closed her eyes, inhaling the scent of his closeness as he finished and then kneeled at her feet. She spread her legs, placing them next to the leather cuffs built for her ankles and her excitement began to build as the last buckle was latched and he stood to survey his work. Content with the sight of her, he kissed her gently, and turned without a word, heading towards the stairs. She stood, cuffed to the cross, the opposite of the position she had spent the entire day in, and watched as he climbed the stairs and closed the door. She smiled, closing her eyes and wondering slightly what he had in store for her, but truly unconcerned, because she understood now he was pleased with her, and the evening would be about her pleasure......

 Posted 11/2/2001 5:43 PM


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You know I could really feel her pain and I felt horror by it. Of course being the unruly bitch I am I felt horror over her pleasure too. But nonetheless absolutely WONDERFUL. I wish you could see my face so you could know I was sincere.
Posted 11/2/2001 6:09 PM by zoodom - reply

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it brings me such a mixture of pleasure and sadness to read Your site...i look foward to the next part of the story...You and Mysticalraine have much talent...
Posted 11/2/2001 7:30 PM by Meilanna - reply

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damn, I'm shivering and all nipply from the cold on this one.  Very imagistic writing.
Posted 11/2/2001 7:56 PM by Daffodilious Xanga Premium Member - reply

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I love what you have done with the story Master, it reads so much more beautifully.  I am so honored to have been a part of this.  Thank you

Posted 11/2/2001 8:34 PM by mysticalraine - reply

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I read the story in it's original version and enjoyed it very much. Yet i must say, you 2 write wonderfully together.
Posted 11/2/2001 10:00 PM by Lyssa - reply

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I can only echo Meilanna's comment...
Great work!
Posted 11/3/2001 3:08 AM by Pox - reply

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Perfect as always! The two of you are magick when you write together.
Posted 11/3/2001 12:23 PM by debi - reply

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You know if this was a book not one of these ladies would put it down and stop reading there, now don't you? LOL! (Just teasing,  not pressuring)
Posted 11/3/2001 12:27 PM by debi - reply

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::nods slightly::

Ever fluent, ever bold.

Posted 11/3/2001 2:29 PM by thgd - reply

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Fantastic duo, you and Misticalraine.

Yum.

Posted 11/3/2001 9:14 PM by the_duchess - reply

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Excellent story, made me feel sad for the woman though - you know thinking of women who actually live their lives like that.
Posted 11/4/2001 4:01 AM by Angeljnny - reply

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Angeljnny there are women who love their lives and live it that way because it's what makes them happy.
Posted 11/4/2001 5:12 PM by mysticalraine - reply

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EROTIC>>>> more please
Posted 11/4/2001 8:03 PM by Starfish2 - reply

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wonderfully evocative writing here.  I hung on the emotional aspect, as opposed to the imagery (which seems strange, being a typically visually-oriented male of the species)...
Posted 11/4/2001 9:51 PM by kluless Xanga True Member Xanga Lifetime Member - reply

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hmmm.....
Posted 11/5/2001 1:22 AM by LKF - reply

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Just checking. Now the above conversation is getting interesting. I'm not the master/slave type so I can't imagine anyone being truly happy living like that. As play or fantasy, it might be okay if that's what you're into, but for real? Nah...I just can't see it.
Posted 11/5/2001 3:29 AM by debi - reply

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Looking forward to reading more!
Posted 11/5/2001 11:05 AM by scarletsadie - reply

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wow, very colorful, wonderful imagery...
Posted 11/5/2001 1:37 PM by cheshired - reply

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I like reading these comments, almost as much as your postings.

While I am a dominant woman (a female "Master") and would probably be quite miserable as a slave/submissive, I understand the attraction to it, and I still find this erotic.

Posted 11/5/2001 2:48 PM by the_duchess - reply

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LOL! Over here, I feel strange. I think maybe I'm the weird one here, since I can't seem to see the attraction for either lifestyle. Dominant/submissive. I've played a lot of bedroom games because I get bored so easily, but to continue it on into real life, more or less? Isn't that what they are talking about? Wouldn't that just make it boring after a while? Routine, if you will? Anyone who actually lives that way, seems to me to be someone with deep pain on the inside. No one is happy, sitting on a cold floor, shivering their naked butt off, hungry, and needing to piss, cramping up for what? For love? That's not love. That's just plain dumb! Sorry, Master, but that's my opinion. heh...I said "master...."
Posted 11/5/2001 3:03 PM by debi - reply

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Although my perceptions and lifestyle may be gleaned by reading my blog, I do not believe that my site is a venue for advocating or preaching my way of life. I write, simply to entertain and to vent. That being said Debi, in an effort to answer your question I will agree with the Duchess (who doesn't?) that there are many men and women who not only crave this lifestyle, but derive pleasure and contentment from it that cannot be found in an ordinary "vanilla" union.

There is a depth of love, desire, commitment and trust that can only be found when you give all you have, your body, your mind and your will to another to exercise. Many in the community do not do this as a 24/7 living arrangement, it varies like the summer winds. Understanding it is very hard for some people, and I respect and appreciate that, but so is understanding Wicca, Zen Buddhism, Republicans and Rocky Road ice cream. It is when we take the step to picture ourselves in the shoes of another, to find that common ground with an idea that is unfathomable that we grow, and when we grow, we flourish.

Posted 11/5/2001 4:54 PM by MasterSeuss - reply

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i feel like i need to give you all a little insight into a submissive/slave's mind... we are not a group of lonely, sick individuals looking for abuse! on the contrary, we are (typically) highly intelligent women who simply understand that our happiness comes from serving another. for most of us there is *One* other, and in my case i want for His happiness more than my own. if it pleases Him that i sit naked on a cold floor all day, i would do it, and i would do it to please Him, because that would please *me* knowing He is proud of me.

there is something incredibly freeing when you give yourself to another. in my case my Master is a loving, gentle, trustworthy man who loves me very much. i'm not a stupid person, and would never give myself to someone i did not trust my life with. in most cases my Master will make a better decision regarding my life than i would make on my own (something to be said for perspective).

there IS an aspect of fantasy here, also... which is derived from knowing yourself well enough to be able to live within the fantasy. we all know that there are the fantasies we want to pursue, and there are the ones that we don't wish to go near. these are our "limits", and our Masters know them well. my Master would never put me in a situation that He knew i was morally opposed to. this is part of His job, to know me that well, and know what i could, or could not, handle. (if the girl in the story had bladder problems, or bad knees, her punishment would, in most cases, have been different).

there is so much more I would like to say on this matter, but will not take anymore of Master Seuss' space to do it. just understand that I am one of the lucky ones, who gets to live my fantasies on a daily basis, within the safety of my Master's confines. … and I am happy, healthy, and cherished.

Posted 11/5/2001 5:43 PM by corsetDoll - reply

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I think I am horrified and shocked when I read these dominant/submissive stories simply because they are situations that I cannot fathom finding myself in--very similarly in the same way I cannot imagine being a woman in an Islamic society, where the women are portrayed in roles that appall American women.  But in these instances, it is essentially what the individual wants, isn't it?  I guess it's not for anyone else to view her as being weak or insane for finding pleasure in episodes such as the one described here, but if she truly wants it, then she's actually strong for having the balls to take it--especially at the risk of suffering society's scorn for her actions.  While I may not understand it, and may even be marginally curious as to what the attraction is to a situation like this, I believe that if she is being loyal to her desires, then yee-ha, good for her.
Posted 11/5/2001 7:15 PM by Daffodilious Xanga Premium Member - reply

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i honestly can't understand it either...my mind, my heart, my pride all recoil in horror just thinking about being treated in such a dominant way, and expecting to be so submissive! if your strength and happiness comes from taking a weak role, then i guess that's what works for you, whatever. but i'm too strong and independant a woman, who finds her strength in being able to stand on her own damn feet and make her own decisions, for the better or for the worst. that's what living is about, thinking with your own mind, not subscribing to others ideas being enforced upon you. sorry.
Posted 11/5/2001 8:23 PM by pink_moon - reply

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I can understand the fantasy behind it, I guess, but not the lifestyle, and it sounds like I should have kept my opinions to myself.
Posted 11/5/2001 10:26 PM by debi - reply

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