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Wednesday, April 30, 2008
 

Last minute graphic design project

 
So I read a few feedbacks, negative ones like this...





    Wow congrats! It doesn't take a rocket scientist to understand that my project was to rearrange an existing magazine spread and target it to a different audience. I mean it was plainly written in english and since I see that you responded to me in the same language,  I am going to assume that we know english here.  Let me explain it again. I took Seventeen magazine which is usually a teeny bopper read and fused it with Vogue and basically recreated a Teen Vogue (only a little more high fashion).
    And the "load or crap off of wikipedia" are called a "Placeholder Texts". Place holder texts are basically bodies of text that takes up a certain area to give the piece an impression of "written text".  See? That wasn't that hard to understand right? So in future reference, please do not criticize me if you did not read my entry explaining what I did. You do not have to know the concept of graphic design to understand my project, it's common sense...which isn't so common anymore huh?

But, to the people who did critique me (intelligently), I thank you. I will definitely take your advices =)


   I attend school to be an illustrator, but one of my courses covers basic graphic design. Apparently it is very crucial to understand it in the creative industry. Since graphic design is not my cup of tea, I gave it my best shot... I finished a cover and 2 inside spread in a course of 1 hour. It's due today at 12:30 pm and I just finished it ( I can be a slacker at times)!

      We basically had to take an existing magazine and revamp it to target a different audience. I took Seventeen magazine that are usually read by the middle school/high school teenage girls and gave it an edgier high fashion quality instead.

So from this teeny bopper Seventeen magazine...







...to a revamped teen high fashion read. Notice how I used Gemma Ward as my main model. She can throw on a garbage bad and still make it look chic. I used some photos from a photoshoot she was in and added text and manipulated it. I even had to extend the top part of the cover photo to fully include in the title. Cloning is my favorite tool. I used a font for the title called Edition (at dafont.com) because it is the closet thing I can find to Vogue's font. I even made sure to keep all the font colors to minimum.



I played with big letters to give it that editorial feel, but had to ensure that it was still fun to read.


Here I cropped off the right photo to include in the large body of text. Notice my play on enlarging a single letter to give it a more interesting flow.


See? Last minute projects are not all bad =)
~ Michelle Phan

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cool!
Posted 4/28/2008 2:33 AM by ginaforever331 Xanga True Member - reply

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"Last minute projects are not all bad =)"

Not bad at all..
Posted 4/28/2008 2:34 AM by mijim Xanga True Member - reply

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nicee work! :]
Posted 4/28/2008 2:34 AM by confession_xxx - reply

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I wish I could whip up a good essay in an hour!
Posted 4/28/2008 2:37 AM by vysion Xanga True Member - reply

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nope not bad
Posted 4/28/2008 2:41 AM by adifferentkindofbeautiful Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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That's pretty awesome (=.

I had to do a magazine project last year too!

I wish I could study chemistry units' in one hour -__-
Posted 4/28/2008 2:59 AM by xsimply_special Xanga True Member - reply

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it looks pretty legit (:
Posted 4/28/2008 3:04 AM by stefani_x3 - reply

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oh i like it..it's pretty cool and lite...look like real magazine
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wow, you can get a job for editorial now :)
Posted 4/28/2008 3:27 AM by kikai_soul Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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nice, i could never write that much and design 5 pages in an hour!
Posted 4/28/2008 3:28 AM by tifflawl - reply

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That looks like it would be an interesting read.
Posted 4/28/2008 3:44 AM by Koko_and_his_YumYum - reply

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WOW! so cool~~~* u are so efficient! ^_^ I <3 Gemma Ward..and I was gonna say..it REALLY has a Vogue feel.. tehhe then I read..Similar Font..and went.. no wonder~* LOL! great job!
Posted 4/28/2008 4:03 AM by luvs_u - reply

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that's so cool =O
Posted 4/28/2008 4:11 AM by online now CHIBIMARUKO_CHAN - reply

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That's a cute layout. The original felt too -- poppy?
Posted 4/28/2008 4:24 AM by MrDaveBoi - reply

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That's a cool project!
Posted 4/28/2008 4:56 AM by online now Lost_In_Reverie - reply

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=) yeah... although i love your works... stick to paintings and drawings. i love designing and... you just haven't gotten the hang of it
Posted 4/28/2008 5:49 AM by xdreamr - reply

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not bad at all
Posted 4/28/2008 6:02 AM by JoeLondon - reply

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Very cool project!
Posted 4/28/2008 6:43 AM by TheCheshireGrins Xanga True Member Xanga Lifetime Member - reply

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can we see the original and your remix version together? cause i cant tell whats the difference -_-
Posted 4/28/2008 7:01 AM by ChAoZ - reply

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This looks strangley familar.
Oh right, it looks like an article that was in Australian Vouge.
Pictures, headings and all.
Posted 4/28/2008 7:41 AM by thinfixation - reply

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woooh. sexy time!
Posted 4/28/2008 8:16 AM by CaKaLusa Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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woah! so cool! i'm thinking of going to art school (RISD, SCAD or SAIC) and i wanna do something in graphic design ^^

Posted 4/28/2008 8:58 AM by v3rsatile3cor3 - reply

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well done!
Posted 4/28/2008 9:52 AM by merenweninwe - reply

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Mag design is not really the most fun design out there. too pilled with words and info. on the front page. no something I care for but he you did it. and it's not as busy as the original. you are a good illustrator. I would have loved to see you mix a painting with it. maybe her siting in a painting of your.
Posted 4/28/2008 11:15 AM by Iszzy Xanga True Member - reply

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What?!?!
You can make a business out of making custom cover magazines for people!
Posted 4/28/2008 11:39 AM by chrispycrunch - reply

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