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Original: 6/8/2006 1:50 PM
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Thursday, June 08, 2006
 
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This morning I found a poem I wrote on Thanksgiving morning last Fall:

Thanksgiving morning.

Geese honk away over the fields.
Six pumpkins sit in a row on my porch, small to big. 
The grass has reappeared during the night,
leaving of last night's snow only icy white crystals
clumped in bits over the green. 
 
The roof still drips the night's damp,
but the sky is a clear, cold, soft pastel blue,
covered by long, wind-blown scuds that drift slowly
North past an almost-risen sun,
which lights them up orange when they go by. 
 
Snow still lies in patches on the rows of the soy field. 
A sweet-gum tree stands firmly before the furrows,
guarding them from my view,
while its still-hanging leaves sway
green and purple in the cold breeze.
 Posted 6/8/2006 1:50 PM - 14 views - 3 comments

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Dear SaintsAndChildren, esq.

Whenever a post is posted, saying that I have written a song, or that I have found a poem... I'm never quite sure which "I" is acutally talking, there being several of you after all.

Who is which, and which is who?
Posted 6/8/2006 10:10 PM by LostOverTheWaterfall - reply

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Good question.  I suppose we haven't been saying who the "I" is due to a vague desire to appear "communal" - it's not important which of us said or wrote this, b/c any of us could have done.  But you're right - it could be confusing.  So, this is Nathan, & so was the latest post.

Posted 6/8/2006 11:09 PM by allsaintesday - reply

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Nathan, I really like this poem. It definitely makes me think of winter holidays at the Tillman abode. And you used the word "scud", which is fabu.

-joanna

Posted 6/9/2006 2:47 PM by SaintsandChildren - reply


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