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| It's my Birthday!! I'm 21!I'M 21!!!! I'M LEGAL!!!! IT'S MY BIRTHDAY! I CAN'T BELIEVE I'M 21! (And yes, I will now continue to write the story. However I will be changing point of view from third person to first person. The story will now be told from Scott's point of view. You, the reader, will better understand how he feels.) | | |
| Ch. 7Setting: Before Noon, after the morning baths
“Scott, I need to explain to you something but we don’t have
the time. After sitting for a while Stephanie got up and walked
towards her bed making it up. Scott sat watching her, wondering how she could
move on, living with this terrible fate. Then he though about his self for the
first time since coming her. What of his parents, his family? What of his home,
his school? What of his college apps, his future? What of questions slowly
filled his mind briefly before an interruption. A knock, then two, at the door. “Oh, Miss Stephanie? It’s me, Rose.” Stephanie immediately stopped what she was doing and ran to
the door pulling back the tough skin. A young woman with long straight black
hair and fair skin wearing a tan animial skin sleeveless, knee-length dress
stood at the threshold. She wore a belt made of fine deer skin sprinkled with
white spots around her waist. It was tied in a knot in back. Her feet bare,
rugged, and lightly sand covered like everyone else in the village. She carried
a small basket with a large handle. It was covered with a skin protecting the
insides of the woven container. “Rose! Oh, it’s so good to see you!” “You too!” She smiled warmly as she and Stephanie embraced.
Scott could tell they’re friends because Steph lighted up. “I still can’t believe it! Congratulations!” Stephanie’s
voice leaped with excitement. “I know, I just found out. I told Lee of course, and my
father’s family.” Rose’s hand gently padded her tummy. “Oh, do come in, Rose. You are no stranger here.” Rose entered their cave or house whatever one would call it.
She placed the basket on the floor. Scott quickly stood up. His face no longer
showed any signs of tears. Actually no one can tell thought Scott. He stood
next to Steph. She motioned to him to greet their guest, Rose, a family friend. “Rose, this is my brother Scott.” “Nice to meet you.” as she extended her hand out to Scott. “Nice to meet you too.” He greeted warmly noticing her shining smile. Turning to Stephanie she asked, “I didn’t know you had a
brother?" “Most people don’t.” Stephanie responded geniuely. “You two don’t look alike. Very different actually.” Stated
Rose in a matter-of-factly way while visually comparing the siblings. “I’m the oldest.” Said Scott suddenly catching Rose
off-guard. “Ready? Cause you’re not as tall as your sister.” “Rose, I think we should wait on questions. My brother just
arrived. It’s only his second day. The chief gave me permission to teach him
the laws in two months. After that, Scott, will become head of the family.” “Really?” pondered Rose, “The chief gave you permission?
That’s odd.” “But Rose, you must remember Lee. He’s my best student. The
chief realizes my ability to teach the law since I’ve broken almost every law.” “You know, your brother is going to be… “Forced to make my decision?” “Yes, forced.” Said Rose softly. “I understand your front,
really, I do but why must to do this? Is it really necessary to live this way?” “Absolutely! I will not rest until some changes are made
regarding us women!” Stephanie declared. “What changes?” spoke Scott with curiousity filling his
eyes. “Women’s rights.” Stephanie responded without haste. “Don’t you mean…” “Rose, I haven’t told my brother everything yet. Please
don’t tell him. This is between siblings.” Rose nodded with agreement. She almost spoke the truth
regarding the source of Miss Stephanie’s pain. So she pulled the basket over to
the enter of the trianglar circle the three somehow made. She lifted back the skinned covering. “Oh, you shouldn’t have!” exclaimed Stephanie as her eyes
teared up. She leaned over giving Rose a hug. “What is it?” Scott said as he looked into the basket. There were small glass bottles of a yellowy green substance.
Two light yellow thick squares with two rolls of small square animail skins.
Two small clay bowls with a painted ribbon like design on it. “It’s bathing soaps and oils.” Giggled Stephanie. “I would have never guessed.” As Scott studied the odd
things in the basket called soap. Rose and Stephanie shared a glance. Rose understood why Miss
Stephanie had not revealed the source of her scars to her brother just yet.
There was much to teach. Rose however took notice of the way Miss Stephanie
cared for her brother. She glazed upon her fatigued body and wondered how such
a weak girl could find the energy to teach. Rose suspected that Scott isn’t
Stephanie’s brother but rather a familiar face from the far away land she’s
heard Miss Stephanie talk about. Scott just stared at the basket wondering if it really was
soap. He wanted to ask a simple question like “What’s that green yellow
liquid?” but he was afraid that he might be rude to Rose. “It’s beeswax soap and aloe oils for your scars. The Healer
said to bathe with the soap first and then use the oils to nurture the skin
back to health.” “You are so kind! Thank you Rose!!!” Stephanie hugged her
friend. “Oh, and the Healer said one another thing.” “What is it?” “He wants to see you.” “Is it serious?’ “He didn’t say. He might want to check up on you.” “Well, he’s a kind old man. He probably just wants to make
sure I’m becoming healthy again. My mother is a healer too so the Healer and I can talk about some things and understand one another.” “I still can't believe a your mother, a woman, knows medicine. How rare? But, you do look weaker than usual, Miss Stephanie.” Rose knew Miss Stephanie mentions her parents rarely because she misses them so. “How odd? Andrew said the same thing to me yesterday. “Don’t
push yourself too hard.’” “Oh, he just cares for you. You’re like his little sister.
That’s all but you really do look weaker. You’re skin is so pale. Are you
eating?” “I had carrots and potatoes last night plus seveal bowls
full of water.” Rose leaned over placing her hand on Stephanie’s forehead
checking for a fever. She didn’t have one. Rose eyeballed any source of injury
minus the scars that could make her appear so weak. Scott just sat listening in
on the conversation. He noted how Steph reacted with Rose. She trusted this
girl for reasons he himself did not know. Rose seemed sisterlike to Steph in
the way they cared for one another. Scott spoke up. “I helped with dinner last night.” Rose turned towards Scott noticing his choice of words. “Really? And why is that?” “Steph was weak so I took care of her.” Stephanie looked at Scott. “You took care of Miss Stephanie? You speak so informally
about your sister? Don’t you know who she is?” “Rose, that’s enough. Yes, my brother cared for me. The
truth is Rose, I’ve been living off of pears. A pear a day for the past 6 days.
I’m desperate for food so while preparing dinner my brother took over. I fell
ill. Last night was the first time I have eaten real food like potatoes and
carrots.” “Oh, Miss Stephanie! Why didn’t you come to my father’s
house? I would have given you some fish and vegetables.” “Because, Rose, you are not my family and either is
Andrew’s. I can not become dependent on you whenever I’m starving. And you need
your food, Rose.” Silent was Rose after Stephanie spoke. She knew it was true.
They were not family and shouldn’t depend on one another in times like these.
However, because of this rule, Rose bought the basket full of skin care items
with directions from the healer to aid her friend in her time of need, to
physically recover. Rose nodded as she gently padded her tummy. She understood
that Miss Stephanie cared for her and that she was strong enough to survive.
Miss Stephanie wanted Rose’s health to be at its best but Rose simply wanted the
one person who was as close to her as a sister to just get better. Scott remained silent observing the speechless exchange of
understood glances between the two. He would not interrupt them in their talk.
Instead he listened to Rose’s words about Steph. She spoke with such care and
revealed details about Steph’s harsh life at this village. He did learn one
thing, Steph is always addressed as “Miss Stephanie” and doesn’t know who she
is. Why was that? How could he not know who his friend is? They’re family here
so surely he knows her although they had not seen each other in 8 months. Steph
had changed. She seemed so welcoming to those like Rose, Andrew and his kids,
and now to someone named Lee. They obviously were the people Steph trusted and
geniuely cared for. He had seen her speak so harshly of the hunters tembling at
the sound of their voices and their presence in the village. He has seen her
express plenty of energy despite how weak she was. He had seen her
disillusional at night, believing that he was a dream. He had seen her behave
in various ways unusual to the kind of person she is, happy and content with
life. While Rose was visiting there was another knock at the door. “Knock, Knock” Stephanie started to get up but then Scott quickly got up
and answered the door. Stephanie was taken back by this but she truly thanked
him from within for answering the door even if he didn’t know how to address a
villager properly. There was no better time than now. A man stood as Scott pulled the bearskin door back seeing
their latest guest arrive at the cave. He stood still expecting Miss Stephanie
to answer. Scott dreaded it could be Matthew but as it turned out he was not.
He wore the normal animal skinned outfit similar to the one Scott wore just
fitted to his height and structure. He had short brown hair and light blue
eyes. He carried what resembled a small messenger bag made from hide. He
politely asked. “Is Miss Stephanie present?” Stephanie noted to Scott nodding her head. “Yes, she is. What can I do for you?” he said. “Miss Stephanie has been summoned for questioning by the
Elders of the Village on regards to the intake of a family member.” The
messenger blanky. Stephanie got up from Rose’s side walking to the door. Scott
stepped back allowing her to take over. He didn’t know why but something in her
body lanuage as she walked to the door made him think she’s been summoned
before. “I am of who you speak.” Miss Stephanie stated to the man. "You have been summoned concerning your newest addition to
the family.”
“I am aware of this. When is the summons?”
“After high noon’s meal.” “Thank you sir. You may tell the Elders that I will arrive
for summons.” “One more thing Miss Stephanie.” “Yes?”
“Your brother must come and be present.” “Why? That is unneccasary for summons.” “The Elders desire to question your exact relation with your
brother. He must verify that you are his sister, as you say he is.” “This is riduclous! Of course my brother is my brother!” “Don’t tell me this, Miss Stephanie. Convince the Elders. Otherwise…” “Please don’t recite the Law to me, young man. I know the
Law better than the Elders themselves.” “Miss Stephanie! If they heard you say that so
disrespectfully they would..” Cutting him off she snared, “What? Torture me?” The messenger gasped when she said that. However sharp of a
tone she used she was right. Miss Stephanie always managed somehow whenever she
was summoned. “You have your summons, Miss Stephanie. I warn you. They
will not be easy on you. Be prepared.” “Tell me, sir, have they ever showed an ounce of kindness in
my favor? Of course not!” The messenger personally chose not to start a quarrel with
Miss Stephanie knowing full well her reputition, her ideals, her arguments, her
strength and her knowledge on the topic. She was a force to be reckoned with. Rose stood next to Scott watching Miss Stephanie take her
summons. She pulled down the bearskin door and walked back to the center of her
little cave. They stared at her as she angrily sat down on the floor with arms
crossed. She was fuming. “You’ve been summoned again?” said Rose raising her brow. “Yep.” “And you must bring your brother?” “Yep.” “And the Elders’ hate you…” “Yep.” “What will you do?” “Defend my right to have my brother live in my house. We are
family and I will convince those slime bags that Scott is my brother!” she
stormed. “Steph, who are the Elders?” Scott asked. “They are the old men of the village. They are the judges of
the society. They are regarded as the wisest of men in the village. They have
summoned me to question our connection as family. They probably want to
disprove that you are not my actual brother but rather someone I just took in
to teach all of my ideals too.” “First off, I answered that door. I had no idea what that
guy wanted but you came to the door and took over. What started off so peaceful
turned ugly. You are going to have to tell me what’s going on. I’m so out of
the loop here. I have no idea how to get home. I don’t know what’s happened to
you since you’ve been here only that you’re serverely injured and
malnourished.” “Scott, there’s a lot happening right now. It’s only your
second day. I mustn’t download you with so much. I want to tell you but in due
time. You just have to trust me. Let me doing the talking. I know how to talk
to the Elders, my own personal demons. I know how to use the Law to my
advantage. You don’t know the Law. I have a short time to prepare for your
defence. But you don’t know my ideals so when they question you your answers
will be blank and surely they will let you go only questioning me.” “Still, I can’t just stand here watching you like this.” “Trust me. Everything will be alright.” Her smile was uneasy. She was becoming lost in thought. Rose
spoke up. “Miss Stephanie while you prepare I shall go home and
collect some soup for you. You need your strength for the summons. I barely
know your brother but I can already tell you care deeply for him as he does for
you. If the Elders can not see this, you must convince them you love each other
as family. Then surely they will allow your brother to stay.” “Rose, that’s so kind of you. Thank you for your words. They
mean more than my words can express. I just wish it was that easy. For I know
what they will say. I must prepare my brother for their commentary.” “Rose,” said Scott after thinking about something for a
while “I noticed something about you. Are you expecting a child?” Rose giggled. “Yes, I am. Did you just take notice?” “This might sound awkward but yes.” He said shyly. “Did you know, Scott, that Miss Stephanie’s former student,
Lee, is my husband. We are expecting our first child.” She glowed as she smiled
at his question. “You and Lee are married?” “Yes,” Rose responded with her love story. “I met him within
the first week he arrived. He’s Chinese says Miss Stephanie and he didn’t know
English says Miss Stephanie. So she taught him our tongue. He came to speak it
very well and has already learned bits. He entered the Fisherman trade and
became very good. He caught many fish and sold some to my father. I just so
happen to be at market that day with my father. That’s when I met Lee. Miss
Stephanie was with him setting up the booth but that’s all she did. Lee was
running the booth himself as a final test. He spoke well, smiled, bartered with
fish and made profit. He passed and was officially accepted into the Village
during Festival. After that time, Lee took notice of me walking in the market
shopping for fish to feed my father’s family. I was of age and Lee asked my
father’s permission to court me. He agreed. Within the three weeks time he
proposed. We married. It was a marlovous celebration. The entire Village came
out to rejoice in our union. We received the blessings of the ancestors and the
Elders, moved into our own home and now are starting a family together.” “Wow.” Said Scott as he reflected upon her words. “So you are how old?” “16.” “16? But you are so young!” exclaimed Scott. “Why didn’t your sister tell you?” “Tell me what?” “The Marrying age.” “Enough Rose.” Stephanie suddenly said after thinking about
her presentation before the Elders. “I have an important summons to face.” “You know they’re going to ask, Miss Stephanie. I think to
need to explain to your brother about your title.” “Matthew still shows disrespect in concerns with my title.
But had I not earned it by now? “Yes, you have Miss Stephanie but you must explain to your
brother now before the summons or his answer will be unprepared and you will
look bad as a teacher of the Law.” “You’re right, Rose. I should.” “Steph, I already guessed it.” Scott remarked. “You’re
unmarried which is why everyone calls you “Miss”.” “Yes, Scott. You are correct.” “And,” continued Scott “This “marrying age” Rose speaks of
probably is between 16 to 18. Am I not correct?” “You are correct, my dear brother.” And the source of your pain lies within this one issue.
Scott thought. “And she’s refused to marry!” declared Rose suddenly putting
her hand over her mouth as Miss Stephanie glared at Rose for revealing her
status within the village to her brother. Her expression was that of a huge
“opps.” Scott looked directly into Stephanie’s eyes. She watered up
a bit but prevent any tears from flowing. This is the source of her sorrow,
pain, tears, and maybe, quite maybe her scars. His eyes widened. “What?. Is this the decision you were telling me about?” Stephanie bit her lip calling on strength to answer his
question. “Uh,…yes..I didn’t…I mean, I didn’t I didn’t want to tell
just yet…because…I…I …I don’t want you to force me into marriage like everyone
else in the village is trying to get me to do! I’m too young I say!” Rose replied while Miss Stephanie’s eyes shed some salty
tears. “Miss Stephanie is of marrying age. She is 17. She can marry
but she refuses to marry. She could have a family but decides to live alone
until you came. Now she has a family without having to marry to have a family.” Scott’s jaw dropped. He was shocked to hear such an
unexpected thing! He had just gotten used to Rose as Steph’s friend and now
she’s just revealed the Steph’s decision. It occurred to Scott that he will
soon be head of the family and make Steph’s decision. Now it clicked in his
head why she begged him not to force her decision. While still in a state of shock high noon passed. Rose had
made lunch for the three of them and they ate to their fill. Stephanie was
motionless unsure of Scott’s reaction. Oh, how she wanted to tell him so bad
but she didn’t want to bother him with this major issue just yet. She wanted
him to enjoy the little things first before giving the news. But one thing
Scott didn’t know was he’s next. “It’s after high noon.” Quivered steph’s voice. “You’ll do fine Miss Stephanie.”that they will try to marry
you off as well…” “Whoa, hold your horses, WHAT!” “That’s right. The Elders of the Village will try to marry
you off. They’ll find someway to disprove our relation to one other, separate
us, and not tell you your rights. They’ll force you to propose to someone.” “They can’t! They can’t do that!” "They tried with me. I’ve denied every proposal from Charlie
because I believe I’m too young and they won’t listen.” “But surely…”
“How do you think I got all of these scars?” “Just from that?” “Most of them.” “It’s true.” Added Rose. “I witnessed most of it, even the
Torture…” “Well, it was a combination of basic law breaking, like
disrespecting the Elders, manners at
Festival, the ancestors thing, and not marrying.” Stephanie replied. Then she changed topics and realized that she had not properly thanked Rose for her kind gift. “Rose, thank you for the bathing soaps and oils. I will use
them and I will see the Healer. He probably want’s to see if the oils are
healing my skin.” “He is a good Healer.” Remarked Rose. She knew it was time to leave since Miss Stephanie had been summoned. One thing she knew was that Miss Stephanie had the power to change the laws. She was the only one capable of standing up to the Elders defending women. She deeply understood her front regarding marriage laws. But she also wondered why she chose this hard life by herself? At times, even Rose, wondered if she married too young. She patted her belly softy then shook her head in the way of a "no". I hope Miss Stephanie doesn't get punished again. I hope she wins for the first time. She doesn't deserve this fate. Miss Stephanie and Scott departed their cave waving goodbye to Rose. Scott pondered about Rose. Did she grow up here? Did her parents arrive here? At least Steph as a friend he thought as he followed her to the trails' beginning.
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| Update on story "Village at the Cliffs"The next installment of Village at the Cliffs is going to be very, very long. Right now, in raw form it is about 14 pages strong in length and only two chapters. Ch.8 might be able to slipt into Ch. 9 but I'm still writing on Microsoft word. So when it does come out expect a lot. I think I'm going to break it into chapters because of the length. It's that neccessary.
What to expect in Ch. 7. -The introduction of a new character named Rose. -Some history about Stephanie -A surprise visit -Rose's social status is likely mention. Take notice in detail. -An expected undesired summons What is Rose's role in Stephanie life? Is she helpful? Do you think Stephanie trusts her? Why or why not?
Ch. 8 and 9 are going to hit hard. Many questions will be answered. Many new twists will occur. -My question for you. "What would have you done in Stephanie and Scott's place? Do you think Stephanie handled the sitution well? Is Stephanie right? Do you personally agree? How has her decisions almost cost her her life? Can you predict where this is going?
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| Ch. 4, 5, and 6.In her dreams, she welcomed the wind blowing against her skin, rushing through her hair as she stood at the Cliff's edge overlooking the village. Oh, how she loved to find her freedom at the top of the cliff. There she could see for miles of green lush forests. The grand river heading downstream east slightly lowering into different chateaus. She could see to her left the river's course towards the other villages lined up next to the water's edge. To her right, she could see the massive waterfall of a few hundreds of feet pour down into a deep pool at its base continuing the flow of its swift current. And she could see where the river continues upstream as it drops from another chateau down to where her village rests. She could only see the smoke of other villages upstream. Her view was blocked by height differences. In her dreams, she would imagine traveling up and downstream to these other villages. She had so many questions. She wanted to find a way home. She would have a boat with plenty of food. She would be strong and healthy. She would push Matthew, the Chief, or the Village Elders out of her way and they couldn't stop her. She would embark down that river on its powerful current passing through its long, graceful, ever flowing stairs to the next village. She would row her boat upon their shore. She would call out as a lost traveler trying to find her way home...her home. She would talk to the villagers about their history. She had so many questions. Did they live in a cliff with handcrafted dorm-sized caves with pill shaped doors? Did they live in tee pees made of deer skins instead of buffalo? How did they live? She wanted to know so badly. Stephanie sought the truth in her dreams. She wanted answers so badly. She wanted to know and learn how this place came to be. She wanted to know how and why people lived the way they lived. She wanted to learn how and why she arrived here and what her purpose was. She just wanted to know. She just wanted to know. Now in her dreams, she stood at that cliff's edge overlooking her new, frightening world. She dreamed of escaping it and going home instead of staying here as if by force. Unable to find a way home she would cry endlessly. She would cry in her sleep calling out for someone to take her home. Anyone to take her home away from this primitive place. She stood at that cliff frozen wishing to go home. Wishing that some giant wind would sweep her off of her feet and she could ride its breeze safely home. She imagined that she would be welcomed warmly with plenty of hugs and kisses from her parents. For she knows they are worried sick. She imagined the warmth of her soft bed soothing her to sleep. She imagined not going to school for the reminder of the year because of all her trauma. She would imagined joyous celebrations for her return. She would imagine many things. Her sister would tightly grab hold of her, talking through her sobs, saying how much she loves her. Her parents would embrace the reunion of parent and child finally at last. She imagined a tear soaked, joyous, reunion with her family. Although Stephanie was terrified of this place and dreamed of finding answers and going home she put her hope in something else. She didn't rely on anybody but herself. She put her hope in herself to muster up the strength and will power to live. Her body and mind displayed a decitation so great the men of the village couldn't help but notice her inability to cave in and give up. She remained strong. Sometimes in her dreams, she had so much strength that she could fight every one of the hunters and win with no effort. She could stand up to them. She was an unmovable pillar of stone strength that none could overcome. She could single handedly pull a large log-carved boat up on shore without the assiantance of 20 men. She was very strong in these dreams. She surpassed them all. But in reality, Stephanie was weak, badly bruised and scared. She couldn't muster up strength all the time and she would cry in her lonely cave she called home. She would feel broken, crushed in spirit, and mentally drained in this culture she personally rejected. Because she rejected the culture and broke its laws she was punished harshly for her actions leading to her injuries. But because she denied one very important law she was tortured like a prisoner of war until she gave in and accepted that the law is the law no matter how she tired to explain why she denied it in the first place. Her voice could not be silent. She did not rely on herself. Instead she put all of her hope and dreams in God. That's how she really lived. It was through God. And in a society that worshiped ancestors she once again broke another very, very important law. She was physically hanging on by a mere thread of hope to one day go home. Stephanie would dream many dreams. They were filled with freedom to find answers to this terrible place, being welcomed home joyously, flying away from here, being like that of a superhero and fighting off all of the hunters and going home. But in her dreams tonight she dreamed of a familiar face. One she's known for a while. One of a friend she knows. This face to her was like the ray of hope shining through the heavens. As if God himself sent someone here to her. Someone who can find a way home with her. Someone who will fight for her honor, defend her, stand up for her, help her, care for her, and someone who she can trust. This familiar face smiled, talked, hugged, and cared for her. This was the face she didn't expect. This is Scott's face she saw, her good friend from high school and church. Someone she only saw in choir class. Unbelievable. Now in her dreams tonight she found a new reason to live. She had a new found purpose. She has someone to protect. She decided then and there in her dreams to guide him in the ways of this culture, teach him to avoid her mistakes and errors, how to live in this society with its laws, and they can find a way home together. She already taught Scott the importance of water. She will be his teacher just as she told the village chief but she would also teach Scott her theories of this place. She has someone to protect now. She smiled barely in her sleep. She welcomed the long awaited sleep at last. She was going home.
Ch. 5
Morning came with a slight drizzel of rain. Scott awoke to rays of soft sunlight flooding through tiny little holes scattered throughout the massive bearskin. One ray fell directly on his eyes. He slowly opened them unsure of where he was. He laid there rememebering the previous day. Was he really here? Did I actually see Steph? He pulled himself out of bed throwing his blanket off to the side and feeling a bit stiff of sleeping on a flay hay mattress on a cold cave floor. The sunlit rays danced around the small space making visible dust in the air. One ray blounced off of some cracked clay bowls. Another shone on Steph's bed displaying the deep red color of her blanket. When he looked closly at her bed, Steph wasn't there! "She up?! Already?" Before Scott could wonder where Steph was he had to attend to business. He left the cave, turned right towards the sound of the waterfall, noticed some young childern running pass him to the green lush bushes. "The bushes is where I woke up?" he thought but he decided to follow the little boys around the corner. They ran on a walking trail. A well traveled walking trail. They said, "I have to pee!!!" "I'm going to pee first!" "I'm gonna beat you!" "Let's race!" And the childish giggles could be heard. The little girls turned left onto another trail while the boys kept running straight. Scott could heard women's voices down the trail the little girls went into. He kept walking eagerly now. Not before long just a few minutes north of the girl's trail he saw the little boys running pass Scott back to the village racing each other. The trail turned left. He could heard men's voices and the roar of water. He turned into the trail passing some older men. The sound of water was getting louder. He came upon springs. Large pools of crystal clear springwater with a couple small waterfalls draining off of the main waterfall feeding the river. Scott noticed some bushes other men were using. Scott quickly figured out that this is a commnunity bath for men only. The other trail was for women only. Things made a little more sense now. Some more men were just chatting about the other day as they bathed in one of the pools near Scott. "Did you know Miss Stephanie has a brother?" "I had no idea!" "Well, I'm sure the Chief isn't so pleased, ya know?" "Yeah, but who knows. We all thought she had no family." "True, but they said he doesn't even look like her." "So, what...they're not family?" "I don't know. You know it's unlawful for a single woman to be living with a young man." "So, they have to be family then. Miss Stephanie knows the laws way too well. She wouldn't dare break them!" he laughed. "Well, she does tend to break laws now doesn't she!" the other man laughed then saying, "You have to give Miss Stephanie credit for being the only person known in our history to live through punishment and The Torture. I can't recall a man living through The Torture." Suddenly he grew silent in respect of Stephanie. Three more men joined the morning bath. They too wore animail skinned clothing. And Scott was about to learn something about Stephanie. Scott listened intendly. He wanted to speak up but he wanted to hear what they were about to say. "Hey! What's cha talkin' about?" asked one of the men who just started bathing. "Oh, we're just talking about yesterday. You know, the latest Miss Stephanie gossip." "Ok, so what law did she break this time." "None, so far." "Huh? Then what?" "Don't you know what's going one? Where were you yesterday?" "Market, why?" "She has a brother!" The three men's jaws dropped. "And they don't even look like family!" "No! You don't say?" Scott leaned his ear over to the conversation some more. "Bub, you know what this means." "She'll have to see the Village Elders again." "I wonder how she'll explain this one!" he roared out laughing. The other men laughed and shooked their heads. Then, one of the men spoke up. "She lived through it you know. She's done the impossible. And now, it's a miracle to learn she has family. Is this impossible too? Yet, she lived through it." All grew silent. "The Torture." he spoke. "The Torture." the men repeated with solmon voices. This was the third time Scott heard this word. Immediately his mind went back to the wooden pole dripping with the thickest spiral rope and small circles hanging. He shivered at the image. One of the men broke the silence. "It's still covered in her blood." Scott could suddenly see the blood on the rope of the small circles! It was her blood! The deep scar on her wrists! No! No! No! It was too dark! Was that why the oldl man's song was so sad?! No!The image of her...no! He couldn't picture her like that! No!!! Scott started to panic at the horror. "NO!! NO!!!!! NO!!!!!!!!!!!" He screamed while covering his ears. His heart could take no more of this. The other men turned and looked at the young man. A new face to the village. Obivously, a connection was made in their heads. They stood silent unable to react. Then one man gently said, "We didn't know you were her brother. We just..." he was at a lost for words. "Yo...yo...you...tried to kill her! How could you!" Scott took off dashing down the men's trail, turning right, continued so until entering the village, racing back to the cave. He was breathless, angry, on the verge of tears, and terrorified. He leaned against the wall slumping down to the floor. Tears uncontrollaly ran down his cheeks. He couldn't help but cry for her.
Ch. 6
Stephanie walked through the bearskin door pulling some of it back. She went over to their food and pulled out some good carrots and potatoes since that's all her body will let her eat anyway. She looked and saw Scott shaken in the corner. He looked sad and miserable in the eyes. His face was dry by now but the look of tears still was edviant. "Scott, are you ok?" "I...uh..." "Scott, before you say anything, I just want to say thank you for caring for me last night. I mean, well, usually I wake up so ill and then drage myself to the river but thank you. Thank you for helping me drink, preparing dinner, even feeding me. I can't thank you enough. So thank you Scott." "Uh, you're welcome but uh, Steph, I uh..went to use the restroom and I found the community springs. The one for men. But, I went in, and overheard some men talking...and you and me. About us not being really family. They talked about..." Before Scott could say another word Stephanie sat down next to Scott and pulled him into her arms embracing him. "I know. It's ok, I know." "But...the blood..." "I know." she spoke softly. "But..the scars. You almost..." "Scott, I know because I lived." She cradled him in her arms humming a soft sweet lullabye. They remained there cradling each other. They cried on each other's shoulders. The pain was all too real now. Scott only take poor Stephanie home. He could see her inner strength begining to show. It made sense now how she could stand up to Matthew. Now, she's super weak and barely well yet she's comforting his soul by helping him cope with her horror. He could feel her shaking due to her lack of physical strength but she reached over to him anyway. She pushed his head on her shoulder allowing him to know that she is there for him. That she will protect him from her fate. She continued to hum softy as they sat in silence.
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| Ch. 6 (Really Ch. 3)As they returned to the cave with the moonlit rays lighting the cloudless sky the cliff's many bearskin doors were partially opened and candlelight could be seen within various villagers' caves. Stephanie immediately crashed on her bed since all of her strength was gone. The pain and weakness in her eyes shone brightly as the moon reflected her glaze. Scott tended to Stephanie by placing the large newly filled bowl next to her bed. She ignored the possbible use of a spoon and leaned over the bowl like a sick puppy to drink. She did not care if Scott watched her in her weakness. Instead Scott helped her with her task and she did not fight but accepted his help. After Stephanie took her fill she leaned back on her hay pillow limp. Almost all of the water was gone and Scott quietly took the bowl and went back to the river to refill it. They did not speak during this time. Stephanie couldn't speak anyway if she tried. Her strength was gone. While Scott walked back to the riverfront one campfire remained lit. The outline of an old man by the light played an instructment that resembled a banjo. His voice echoed through the silent riverfront and softly bounced off of the cliff as he sung. Scott found his voice to be kind like that of a grandfather's but he didn't stop as he walked to the river. The old man's song was a sad one and distant to the culture of this land. The river water welcomed Scott once again and he thought of Stephanie's first lesson. "The river is the source of life here at the Village." He thought of her words as true as ever in her current situtaion. Scott glanced around him making sure Matthew's presence wasn't waiting to question him and his relation to Stephanie. Scott shook off the idea of Matthew focusing only on Stephanie. He thought to himself. "If I hadn't come when I did who knows how long Steph would have...lived." The thought freaked him out. He wished to only envision Stephanie getting strong and healthy again not worse. As he filled up the bowl he thought of her scars. When he helped her drink he studied her scar-covered arms. So many random and long scars up and down her arms. Some were well-healed and probably the oldest. Others were light red and some were freshed, blood-cotted, scars. Then there was the deepest of all the scars. This scar terrificed him deeply to a very comfortable level, her wrists. When he helped her drink his hand ran gently over the deep, wide, scar encircling her wrists. Layers of skin unpeeled or brutally removed deep enough that Scott's fingers ran slightly downwards into the soft tissue with tenderness of a third degree burn. He looked at his own wrists unable to imagine the horror. He placed the bowl at the water's edge and looked around the vast open riverfront. There off towards the path to market there stood a tall, solid, pillar of wood, which was cylinder in shape. It had the thickest spiral rope wrapped tightly around the pole with two strands hanging rope with small circluar loops at it's tips. Scott took the bowl with him as he walked towards the pole but due to the darkness he didn't see well. Pole blended in to the surrounding trees. Scott didn't see this earlier. "Maybe that scar is from this rope. The thickness is right...!?" He backed away from the pole shaking his head from left to right. "No....no....NO! This CAN'T be?" He turned away walking quickly to the cave with a fresh bowl of water for Stephanie. He passed the campfire the old man was at singing and playing his instructment. Before Scott completely passed him the old man called out to him stopping Scott in his tracks. "Exuse me, young man, what'cha doing out so late on this fine evenin'?" he asked genuinely. "I'm getting water for my sister." "Your sister, ay?" "Uh, yes sir. I am." "Well she musta be ill if you'd be getting the water!" The old man barked under the camplight. Scott saw his missing teeth and those yellow ones remaining. "Yes sir. She's ill." Scott didn't think of her as ill until now. "That's woman's work. Don't ye knows that?" He smiled as he began to play his banjo looking instructment. Scott quickly answered. "She's too ill to get water herself, sir." The old man nodded agreeing with Scott. "Women do get ill sometimes. Sit with me for a while. I get lonely. I have no family." He smiled offering a seat on the log next to him. "I can't. My sister needs this water now but thank you for the offer." Scott said. "It's probably best you be getting to your sister with that water." The old man sat silently and then continued singing his sad song. Scott heard the song echo through the night as he walked back to the cave. Then it occured to him. He never asked the old man his name and nor did the old man ask him his name. Scott reached the cave placing the bowl next to Stephanie's bed. She painfully lifted her head towards the water. Her body ached for it's soothing taste but she fell back on her pillow hard. She had no strenght. Scott moved around behind Stephanie's head and slowly lifted her head prompting it on his knee high enough to lift the bowl towards her lips. She drank deeply filling every mouthful with large glups of water until she got her fill and her body could drink no more. He replaced the bowl on the hard ground next to her. He cautionously lowered her heard onto her pillow while slowly moving. Then he unmade her blanket at the tips of her bed and pulled the red cloth up to her shoulders. She used a voice so soft and weak barely a few levels above a whisper when she spoke. "Is this a dream?" "No, I'm real. It's truly me." "Why are you here?" "To take care of you." "Really, that's so kind of you. No one would take care of a poor girl like me." "I would. Just rest now. It's late." "Ok, goodnight." "Goodnight." Her eyes closed without hestitation as she entered a much needed deep sleep. Scott never heard her speak in such a way before. Her voice so weak and unsure as she was she still smiled at him. She was childlike in her tone but he only noticed her odienece. Scott closed the bearskined door and in the pitch black walked over to his bed crashing on the hay and pulled the blanket up to his shoulders. He quickly pulled some hay out of the upper right hand corner of his bed to make a make-shift pillow before closing his eyes. His thoughts raced through his mind. "I'm glad I'm here for her." "She needs me." "This is only my first day." And with that final thought he too surcomed to his own much needed sleep.
The old man remained singing softly throughout the night playing alone in the camplight.
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