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Original: 1/21/2008 7:54 PM
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Monday, January 21, 2008
 

Drumbeat

The palm drops
on the inside
of the skin
animal drumming
beating on the drum
drumbeating the night
beating on the eardrum
drum drumming deeply
drawing the heartbeat drumbeat.

My body is the drumbeat
drumbeating my skin
sweating, hot,
drumbeating my body's
percussion, rub, snare,
pounding, colliding of
musical pulses
lyrical sinewy
or staccato modern
or wild shamanic
hair flying
free.

Red shiny satin clinging,
wet
sweat.

The djembe hip bag that I scrubbed, suede dyed to emulate Holstein cow naugahyde, in black and cream, with a wild boar bristle brush and saddle soap because of the dark streaks, smells of animal hide.

I hold it to my nose, and smell. Animal. Hide.
The drumming of the jungle.
An animal skin.

Taut.

Primal beat bounding
resonating, resounding.

You gaze at me, though you haven't looked at me.

I am in your gaze without your seeing me.

It is my hunger you remember feeding,
that you want to feed.
Our heat burns hotly.

Drumbeating
the rhythms beating in us,
the African djembes
dance us.

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Lately I've been dancing to fabulous drumming. I'd like to thank the drummers at Toronto Tam Tam at Xing Dance Theatre, Shara Claire at 5Rhythms, Gary Diggins, and Kwanza Msingwana at Tribal at Dovercourt House in Toronto, all in the last 3 weeks.

As a lyrical poet, I use the I-Thou relationship often in my writing. The "you" is a museman and doesn't refer to anyone in particular...
 Posted 1/21/2008 7:54 PM - 7 comments

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This Poetry has a rhythm of its own! Surely it captures the experience!

Your profile image is great. It goes with the Poetry in light and movement.

Blessings~
Posted 1/22/2008 1:43 PM by madmorrigan - reply

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You are so prolific!  While I feel at times that I am still cultivating my creative language you seem to know and understand your.  You inspire such warm passion for the path of the creative spirit.  You are like a gift from the gods a wild free spirited bird that flies into the lives of mortals only to remind us to look up, be open, breath deeply for life holds the breath that supports life.  That living is merely the beginning expressing engaging and fully participating in the co creation of the universe is the substance and honoring dance of existence.    Once again you have blessed me with your heart and spirit, your creativity and your beauty.  Your writing is so concise, rhythmic, tactile and emotionally kinetic.  I felt those drums on a celluar level. Powerful! I love the dance videos, I will have to return when I am home so that I will have sound. I am at work right now and ? no speakers?     Thank you lovely feminine Spirit for gracing us with your heart and soul; truly a gift from the gods… Blessings and much love and appreciation, Ashes
Posted 1/22/2008 4:08 PM by Ashes_2_Ashes_Words_2_Words Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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I can feel the rhythm of your words, and the raw, primal hunger Much love.
Posted 1/24/2008 9:54 AM by BoureeMusique Xanga True Member - reply

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The rhythms remind me of Patti Smith's earlier works
Posted 2/1/2008 9:57 AM by online now EminemsRevenge Xanga Lifetime Member - reply

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I just read your poetry aloud to my wife (with my arms around her).  She loves your poetry as much as I do, and that's saying something.
Posted 2/15/2008 7:01 AM by twoberry Xanga True Member Xanga Lifetime Member - reply

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Thank you and many many blessings, hugs and much love to you this morning!  I loved your reference to the orchard, especially here at the threshold of spring...I do feel that the time has come to become fully an expression of creativity; expressing in all areas and aspects of living life fully, joyously and passionately. You are a great part of the encouraging supportive forces of nature.  Through your writings, your art and dance…you seem to me be one of the most prolific, passionate and expressive creatives that I have ever had the honor of being acquainted with.  I write this sincerely with the utmost respect for you as an artist of feminine nature.  I hope I am making sense…I overslept and I am rushing to get my morning projects finished before I head off to work.  But I just had to let you know how much you and your gifts are appreciated!   Thank you again for your kind and lovely words. Ashes aka Liz
Posted 2/15/2008 9:58 AM by Ashes_2_Ashes_Words_2_Words Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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I love your poetry.  It is always over-the-top, pushing me places that feel raw, compromising my comfort level.  You leave no one behind.  Great to hear from you and thank you for the kind comment.
Posted 2/15/2008 6:32 PM by ydurp Xanga Premium Member - reply


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