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Sunday, February 17, 2008
 

Oceanic - Suite of Botticelli Venus Poems

Oceanic - Suite of Botticelli Venus Poems

Veils to clothe Botticelli's Venus with

A poem arises catching the energy, imparting meaning, hesitant, faltering for words, images, rhythms.

My love for you.

Slowly, through endless revisions,
shaping this love.

Disparate layers emerge, an undercurrent infiltered with strands, approaches, understandings, memories, hopes, desires, the way the sensual mind composes.

We create ourselves through each other. It's more complete, who I am with you.

Not a version of reality but a veil of being,
the poem of love that is
a transparent garment we clothe ourselves with,
our metaphors and concepts of a world

which resists
our gaze.

Writing is a deeply
meditative act.

A language of love.

A listening.


Oceanic

If I knew how. The swirl-over. In the bank's marble concourse, the ocean wraps you in its currents. We are never far from sea-salt, the briny wind, even inland.

The gentle breezes, long before Sandro, before she came gliding on the fan-shaped scallop sea-shell under his paintbrush.

Before we clothed her with poetry.

The birth of love in the world.


Divine Message of Beauty in the World

I write on vellum with sea-scalloped edges.

Birth blueness is everywhere, that particular nascent colour.

You bring the simplicity of writing with you.

While I wear a cloak of flowers, a shower of roses, lyrical, fragile becoming, beauty, this flowing cape of words

That the goddesses of the seasons have woven for us.

____________________

Botticelli's Birth of Venus hangs in the Uffizi, in Florence. It was painted in 1485.


birth of beauty

times of decrease, recession, turmoil, depression, upheaval, war, loss and degradation, fear and grief, the unpardonable, what can't be retracted, the birth of love borne by beauty on the waves of the sea

Savonarola's body burnt in the Piazza della Signoria, it is 1498, he who convinced you to renounce the sensual pleasure of beauty - The Mystical Nativity painted in 1500 so different to when

you and Leonardo da Vinci, a friend who you studied with in Verrocchio's workshop in the 1470s

those angelic visions

art historians speak of spiritual tautness in your work, of the grace of line and that your figures are holy heiroglyphics

she appeared under your delicate sable brushes in 1492 and disappeared for centuries until the Pre-Raphaelites resurrected her and now she is a definer of feminine beauty in the modern world

with my curls, when I was a young woman, people used to compare me to 'Botticell's Venus'; I, too, have borne her...

rising from the sea

the rush of waves in my ears

listening to you

beauty, fragile, on the lip of, edges, knowing loss's inevitability, a flower blossoms, fragrant perfume and soft vivid colour of petal drifting away, it can't remain, you knew, Sandro, and

yet, she is, borne by the Zephyr on the scallop-shell and wrapped in veils of flowers by the Horae

washes of colour, seaspray of roses,

translucent robes

poetry we weave ourselves with

_________________

©Brenda Clews, Toronto, February 2008

 Posted 2/17/2008 10:41 PM - 9 comments

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funny.  i was humming to myself after dinner and it started to zone me out.  I told my fiance I needed to meditate more.  Yesterday it was the urge to write.  If i could get on my game, I'd be doing them simultaneously
Posted 2/18/2008 1:59 AM by wonderplum - reply

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Good morning
Brenda, Sometimes you are simply too much to take in at one offering. I say this with the highest regard and appreciation for your passion and your creative giftings.  Often I find I must honor your gifts by simply sitting with your writings or artwork for a while…giving  quiet attention to each word.  Like being in a good gallery, the art is spaced out so that one can focus on each particular work.  So I shall sit, as I often do with your words so powerful, and will return. Blessings, Ashes
Posted 2/18/2008 1:12 PM by Ashes_2_Ashes_Words_2_Words Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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Oh my L-rd, but these are profoundly, perhaps unutterably, beautiful compositions~
Posted 2/18/2008 3:44 PM by madmorrigan - reply

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Blessings~
Posted 2/18/2008 3:45 PM by madmorrigan - reply

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Wow, you have been busy.  Your work takes me a long time to digest so I will have to come back when the stock market closes.  But the first one I had time for:  "which resists
our gaze"   yes.
Posted 2/22/2008 11:20 AM by ydurp Xanga Premium Member - reply

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Did I mention how the scalloped edges make me want seafood? Your poetry is so sensual!
RYC: Thank you, thank you, thank you.
Posted 2/27/2008 10:19 AM by BoureeMusique Xanga True Member - reply

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Reading what you wrote is like listening to music with my eyes. I couldn't even begin to say where and why and how the rhythm comes from, but it is there, woven in a way that makes the framework invisible, and all the more powerful.

Beautiful poems...

~ SM

Posted 3/3/2008 8:29 AM by healingplace - reply

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The last ten lines of the first poem are so powerful.

I so love this line in the second work, """The swirl-over. In the bank's marble concourse, the ocean wraps you in its currents."""

The images of "wrapping ourselves in poetry" and "wrapping poetry around our art"" are wonderful themes. Brenda, when I think of your work, your art and your writing the word that comes to mind is elegant. I am proud that I have one of your works sitting in our guest bedroom. Cheers, Bill
Posted 3/14/2008 11:47 AM by vexations Xanga True Member Xanga Lifetime Member - reply

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Scribble outside the lines...
It is so good to hear from you.  I have read these writings a couple of times and I have not commented because sometimes there is simply no verbal response that can or should be made…just simply having the experience is enough.  I thank you for sharing them.   I would just like to share that…You are without doubt the most creatively sensuous person that I have ever encountered.   Every time I read one of your writings, see your artwork or your dance or hear you reading your poetry…I am set on fire with inspiration.  My goal to grow as a woman and human being from the foundation of pure creativity is strengthened by your example.  It fans the flames of my desire to have creativity permeate every aspect of my life.  I have been working diligently to make this happen.  Creating sacred space to nurture and foster such growth.  I have the emotional, physical and mental freedom to make this happen…to live a life of creativity.     I have wanted to share this with for quite sometime…but I could not find the words, and I still am not sure if I am conveying my gratitude or expressing fully the impact that you have on my life.   I just know that every time I am blessed by a new entry…I am invigorated to find yet another way to incorporate “living life fully, creatively and beautifully.”   OK…I hope that I have been somewhat successful in expressing my sincere appreciation for the wonderful gift that you are to me.  If not then all I have left to say this morning….is….thank you.   Blessings and hugs,
Posted 3/18/2008 10:33 AM by Ashes_2_Ashes_Words_2_Words Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply


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