Maybe the flowers are just for looking at - like me. Not meant to be touched, only meant to be seen. You sing me lines from your beautiful poetry, but saying something more beautifully doesn't make it easier to read. You say you love me but you're a white-washed empty grave. It doesn't matter how loud you sing, it won't take your pain away.

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Sunday, January 16, 2005
 Sorrow for a Diadem

Your hair is red, your lips are green,
You know what’s sure to make me scream.

My eyes are tired, my shirt is torn,
I’d love to kill you before you’re born.

You make believe I’m someone else,
A beautiful face on a pretty shelf.

With your kisses sweet and eyes complete,
You match your gown with villainy.  
Just wait until the milk turns sour,
You’ll send me packing within the hour.

I’m tired of the weight upon my shoulders.
It’s been too long and we’re getting older.
I’ll kiss you and sing you to sleep,
When I’m gone, love, promise not to weep.

I know you must love me dear,
I’ve stuck around a couple years,
If you didn’t I’d be dead…
But I am dead and you are dead,
And we like spinning in fast paced circles
Round your other lover’s grave.

My shirt mended, perfectly clean,
Buttoned so tight that I can’t dream.

My hips, too high, my knees too low,
To match your rhythm flow for flow.

If you will be my (she was your) one and only,
Then we both won’t be so lonely.
 
Just waiting for our hair to dry,
And trying, hardly, not to cry.
Just wishing we had half the time,
To sit around and watch the flowers die.

Sadly there’s nothing else to do,
But cut my tongue in two.
And I would love you but I love myself.
I would kill to be someone else. 

I know you must love me dear,
I’ve stuck around for a couple years,
If you didn’t I’d be dead…
But I am dead and you are dead,
And we like spinning in fast paced circles
Round your other lover’s grave.

(But she's dead, won't you just leave her alone?)
 Posted 1/16/2005 10:41 PM - 12 comments

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WOW! All I cn say is wow.

Bob the lemur of God was here.

Posted 1/16/2005 11:15 PM by WAYLAND778 - reply

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Your other xanga doesnt look stupid, it just doesnt look artsy like this one yet
Posted 1/17/2005 12:21 AM by outcasts4jc - reply

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hey, this is bethany (just making sure you know) i was just wondering about the opening paragraph of your post on jan. 5. were you inquiring to my post concerning predistination? if you were, i just want you to know that, it is not that i believe that God chooses who goes to heaven or hell. it is just something i have been doing lately. studying the bible, asking question, finding out what other's think, trying to stir up some effort and thought about the bible. i just wanted you to know. but anyways, sarah, you are an incredible writer, you have inspired me so much this last week and i just want to say thank you, and you are amazing!
Posted 1/17/2005 9:13 AM by Togee - reply

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wow i thought that was awesome even though it kinda scared me but thats what i thought was awesome about it. you kinda remind me of ann rice when you write. have you ever read anything of hers? shes one of my favorite writers but she'll never amount to edgar allen poe in my mind.

Posted 1/17/2005 12:19 PM by hollow_cries - reply

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To be truthful with you, I did not like this poem. Just a personal opinion, of course, you know I think quite highly of all your others... but I figure you might as well hear the bad with the good.

Posted 1/17/2005 4:28 PM by shiawase_beam - reply

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chr p Sarah. thngs d rlly sck, lt, bt... yh... cn't rlly sy nythng. hv n dvc t gv, nthng hppy t sy. n f my bst frnds lst hs fth, nd s yh... lthgh stll nvy Brian. ys, mn s stll thr, knd, bvt t's hrd t s. chr p, kd.

Posted 1/17/2005 5:48 PM by xiaopenguin - reply

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why do you envy brian, and i can't figure out the last part of that lol.

and thanks for those of you that liked it, and thanks jessica lol.. for not liking it? lol.
Posted 1/17/2005 10:36 PM by crying_ashes - reply

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Lol Yep, no problem. I like your free verse style best. It sends chills down my spine.. This kind sorta makes me laugh, Lol So.... write more of my favorite! That is a demand! Maybe...

Posted 1/18/2005 10:28 AM by shiawase_beam - reply

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I liked the rhyming :D it's pretty
Posted 1/18/2005 8:41 PM by angel_eyes02 - reply

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I like it! ...but I do like your free verse better, too.
Posted 1/19/2005 8:31 AM by LoveAwakened - reply

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yeah i do too. but it was fun to rhyme and i was inspired by mandy :D
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oh yeah... PSST! that's my new xanga lol.
Posted 1/19/2005 2:59 PM by Romancing_the_Dead - reply


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