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Tuesday, July 31, 2001

For the first chapters of Book One . . . Amador Green

For Chapters 14 and following . . .

http://ag2_14_16.blogspot.com/

Installment #13

--Hell on Earth in Heaven

"This prison they have her in is located at an elevation of 5,000 meters."
 
Marty put down his glass. "How much is that in feet?"
 
Sydney shrugged.  "Fifteen thousand, more or less."
 
Alex about to take a bite from his taco, pulled it back from his mouth. He stared at Sydney and then looked at Marty.  "Wait a minute. Uh. . . like, let's see . . . how high is Donner Pass?"
 
Marty shrugged, "I dunno; nine, maybe ten thousand."   He folded his last taco in half and pushed the whole thing in his mouth as he went on talking.
 
Sydney shook his head.  "What's he saying?"
 
After a big gulp of his *cafe con leche* and a burp, after wiping his mustache on his cuff, he burped again.  "I said that so far's I know, the highest peak in the Sierras is that Mt Whitney up there above Lone Pine, where we took that eco-tour hike that time, Toker?"
 
Alex thought awhile. "Oh . . . yeah.  Bummer. How could I forget.  That was up around fourteen thousand feet.
 
"Better 'n that.  It was fourteen and a half."
 
"Man, you could hardly breathe up there, colder 'n a witch's . . . remember that tour guide chick?"
 
"Do I!"
 
Alex looked at Sydney.  "She made us poop in plastic bags and pack it out with us."
 
Marty nodded. "And if you pooped on the way up, you had to pack it all the rest of the way up . . "
 
"And then all the way back down again."
 
Sydney observed them momentarily. "How do you Americans say . . . ahhh . . .  Does the bear go shit in the woods?"
 
After an exchange of glances with Marty, Alex said, "Is this guy trying to tell us something?"
 
Marty snorted out a short laugh.
 
Alex tilted his head and looked at Sydney through one eye. "It's out of respect to the eco-system."
 
"But what about the bear shit? 
 
Alex gave him one quick half a chortle.
 
"It's no laughing matter," observed Marty.
 
Sydney shrugged. He sat forward.  "All right. Listen to me:  Not only is this Gringa revolutionary sister of yours incarcerated at 15,000 feet, but she is surrounded by a mine field."
 
His eyes widening, Alex turned them to Marty.  "Holy balls of holly!"
 
"Jimeny Christmas!" Marty sat forward.  "What else?"
 
"There is no glass in the windows in this prison, there is no heating; they have only blankets to keep them warm, that is if they have relatives to bring them. Their extremities swell up, and in short, it is strictly not natural for human beings to live at such an elevation."
 
"It's a Death Camp."  Marty stared at him.
 
"You could certainly so suggest."
 
"Are you sure there are no windows?"  Alex looked at him suspiciously.
 
"With my own eyes, I have seen the Yanamayo prison at 4,000 meters . . . "
 
Alex's eyes rolled. "What's that?"
 
"About 12,000 feet; it's a facility built on the shore of Lake Titicaca; up there they built it on the site of the old Inca burial towers; they built more towers, and there is no glass in the windows.  They say it is the same at Chacapalca in the Cordillera above Lima where she is now, but then that may be a moot point because there, no towers are built but chambers which are located eight meters below the ground . . . about 25 feet.  She shares her grave with three other living corpses; they let them out wearing black hoods, once a day into the courtyard, and in this way, they are not permitted to see the outside world that is no longer a part of their lives."
 
Alex and Marty had stopped all movement, and when Sydney had ceased talking there was only the sounds of the traffic passing at the curb, the muted conversation of an elderly couple who had taken a table on the other side of the aisle leading to the bakery door. Sydney's hand was in the air.  The waiter who had been serving the old couple came to the table.  "Mas cafe, por favor."
 
Sydney returned his gaze to the boys. "The soldiers who attend the Chacapalca prison are rotated on a bi-weekly basis because their health will not stand it otherwise.  No soldier ever volunteers for that service. They patrol the perimeter of the prison day and night."  He sat back a little and crossed a leg turning one over the white trousered cotton fabric of the other.  "So, that is what you are up against my fine Gringo amigos."  His smile was made of purest irony.
 
Alex looked at the man.  "Then she'll die in there."
 
The boys stared at him.  "Yes! Of course. Certainly she will die there, if not from exposure and lack of food, then altitude sickness, or she'll be shot, if not bludgeoned to death in one of the many strikes and outbreaks that occur."
 
Alex and Marty studied each the expression of the other. They heard Sydney speak: "You have told me that where there is a will, there is a way." They turned back to regard him. He smiled. "You can come up with a plan?"
 
After another quick glance shared between them, Alex said, "We'd have to smoke on it."
 
"Well good!  Now I'll tell you of the invitation that has been extended to you through me from the Kogi farmers."
 
"Huh?"  Alex shot a look at Marty.
 
"They were highly grateful for your efforts in their regard, and they have told me to tell you that the hospitality of their homes high in the cloud forest are open to you any time that you may like to come and stay with them."
 
"Wow," said Marty.
 
"When?"
 
"Any time. I said. We could all go with them just as soon as their business here in Leticia is complete."
 
"Jeez."  Alex moved aside for the waiter who replaced his empty glass with a fresh full one.
 
"For me," said Sydney, "it is an excellent opportunity to study their methods of cultivation, to discover whether they plant from seed or from cuttings, what species they are growing, if the plants are indigenous to that region or otherwise."  He looked up at the waiter.  "Gracias."
 
Watching the waiter leave, Alex said, "It would give us time to think this whole thing through, now I'll say that about it."
 
"Yes."  Sydney with a growing smile raised his glass.  "And working for me, you could make a few pesos for the use of your mission."
 
Marty looked a little reticent. "Well, we'd be back in a canoe, paddling up a river, all the way up to the top?"
 
"Oh!  No."  Sydney shook his head.  "They come down by canoe, but they go back by mule train, either that or depending on how rich the reward for their crop is, they fly back on one of the cartel's small aircraft."
 
"Hoo boy."  Marty regarded Alex.
 
"Yeah, I don't know about that." Alex looked at Sydney.  "What do they do with their canoes?"
 
"They sell them, and when it's time to make the trip again, they build another; at this, they are quite expert; in two days or less, working together they will have a fresh new canoe for the next voyage."  Sydney regarded them further, then nodding to his own thought he finally said, "I'll charter a plane to Pasto.  I have a botanist friend from the University in Bogota who will drive us over the Cordillera to Mocoa, and down into the cloud forest region of the Kogis."
 
"Wow," said Alex.
 
"He is a fine fellow, Dr. Guzman.  I am sure you will find him interesting.
 
Marty, deep in thought with a hand buried in his beard suddenly looked up. "Can Violetta and Antulio come with us?"
 
"Under no circumstances."  Sydney waved an extended finger. "Neither the Kogi farmers nor I can afford to be found in the company of people with prices on their heads and who are one foot in hell at fifteen thousand feet."
 
"Well then . . . " Marty shrugged.  "Maybe I'll just stay here for awhile, and you guys can go ahead, so I . . . "
 
Alex stared at his friend. "What?"
 
Marty smiled looking down upon his hands. "I've got a pretty nice little thing with Violetta going here, and . . . "
 
Alex for long moments stared dumbly at the table.  "Oh no.  This can't be happening."  He looked at Marty.  "When . . . how . . .?"
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Chapters 14 and following . . .
 


Friday, July 27, 2001

The first chapters of this story are now on line under the following link . . .

Amador Green

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Thursday, July 19, 2001

AMADOR GREEN - Book Two of a two-part Novel in Progress by JP David

The latest installments appear first. For the earliest chapters, just scroll to the bottom and click the "Next" link.

This is the story of a couple of thirty-something California Boys whose mission it is to save the Amazon rain forest by getting right down there in it, and doing whatever it takes to get that done.  They soon find out that the Amazon jungle is no bed of fragile and delicate roses.


Wednesday, July 18, 2001

Installment #12

--Hotel Anaconda

The ceiling fan creaked, slowly turning. Strains of rum marinated campesino song came through tall windows from a cantina on the street below. As he lay awake with arms folded behind his head, neon flashing blue, next red, then chartreuse revealed the face of Alex on another cot where he lay staring up at the whirling fan. Marty shifted his glance deeper into the room where a rectangle of wan yellow light from the transom revealed the round, sheet-shrouded mound of Sydney stretched out on a double bed, hands folded over his burgeoning stomach.

Alex whispered loudly. "You guys awake?"

"Yeah."  Marty looked between his feet.  "How about you?"

Sydney groaned, his bed creaked. "Go to sleep! "Again the bed rattled.

"We're too excited," said Marty.

Alex rolled over. "Couldn't you just tell us what you think, Sidney old bean?"

"Sangre de Christo. No! Ask me in the morning."

Marty's face flashed in the yellow light of a lighter flame.  "Aw, what's Sydney gonna know about all that stuff anyway? Let the man sleep." The red tip of his cigarette described an arc in space as he moved to set the lighter with his cigarettes on the floor.

A long sigh, and then, "I know enough."

"Well, come on and tell us then, Sydney."  Alex propped himself up on his elbow.

"Yeah, tell us everything you know, Sydney."  The bedsprings grated as the man turned to face Marty:

"All right.  You asked. Here's what I know:  it's an imposible venture. Those two were only challenging your opinions, trying to make fools of you. It's -- how you say in English -- a wild goose chase.  Now forget about it and go to sleep."

Marty's face glowed red as the ember of his cigarette sparked.  "Fools of us? I mean, like, us?"

"No way," said Alex.

"Must I throw you both out into the street?"

Alex sighed.  "Aw shucks."

Marty rolled over.  "Good night, Sydney."

"Good night!"

"Good night, Toker."

"Sleep tight, Moon Man."


On a morning breeze wafting up the street from the mist shrouded Amazon, a scent of freshly baked bread came from a little *paneria* on a corner across from the Anaconda Hotel, where Sydney and the boys were seated at one of a few tables set out on the walk.

Some eggs and pork fell out the end of Marty's taco as he took a big bite.  "This sure is swell of you Sydney."  He looked up to see the man give a mere shrug:

"It's the least I can do for the two biggest fools in all of Columbia."  He smiled.  "Such an honor has been lacking; it's really far too small an award for so great an accomplishment."

"Okay."  Alex set down his glass of *cafe con leche*.  "Make us wise then Sydney, and leave us not in the lurch of a false understanding here for much longer, my man."

"Yeah," said Marty, as he hurried up and tried to catch with his mouth some more scrambled egg falling from the wrong end of his taco, the second of five that had been on his plate.

"Melissa Brenson, first of all, is, most likely a revolutionary and not just the innocent bystander that her people, Antulio and the rest would like to make it seem."

"Big deal," said Alex.  "We're revolutionaries, too!"

Sydney grit his teeth.  "Hush with that around here in public!"  He looked about to see if any other ears had heard it.

"Yeah, best cool it, Dude."

Alex leaned forward to speak softly.  "A person can be a revolutionary without being a terrorist."

"Here, it amounts to the same thing."

"But just look at Mahatma Gandhi," said Marty.

"Look at the time he spent in prison."

Alex nodded. "Okay. But, what about Mother Theresa?"

"Mother Theresa?"

"Well, you know what I mean." Alex popped the rest of a taco into his mouth.

"I'm afraid that not even you know what you mean, Alex. Sydney touched a napkin to his mouth and took it away. "In any case, believe me:  Melissa Brenson is no Mother Theresa."

Alex shrugged.  "Neither was George Washington."

Sydney sat shaking his head as he looked from one to the other. "You two have been back in your California hills smoking that far too potent highbred *cannabis sativa* of yours for too long, to be long for this world."  Seeing their nonplussed expressions, he added, "It is not that you are completely without intelligence, however."

Marty huffed. "Well, that's only your opinion."

"Yes.  Unlike most, I would give you the benefit of the doubt.  At one time, you both might have amounted to something, but your take on the world is so far from the reality of politics and a standard of social sensibility that I might as well be calling from earth to the moon as to sit at a table and talk with you like this. You're way out there, you guys."

Alex smiled.  "He's got our number Moon Man."

"Yeah, just so long as we don't get it unlisted."

"There's hope for you.  It's only that you're missing your calling.  You really are not revolutionaries."

"Then what?" Alex took a big swallow from the tan toned liquid in his glass.  He licked his moustache.

"That is for you to say."

"Okay," said Marty.  "I'll say it: we are like Mother Theresa."

"Oh, yes!" Alex  grinned.  "We're so everlovin' revolutionary that you can't even tell by lookin' at us; you might think we were a couple of sisters of mercy."

Sydney stared, and then he snorted.

"Don't laugh, Sydney." Marty held up a finger with an air of high pedantry. "Because do you know what?"

"What?"

"To be truly revolutionary is to be unheard of."

"Wholey other," said Alex.

"I'll grant you that."  Sydney smiled.  "As you Americans say, I have never seen the like."

"Okay, so that's why.  Cause see, me 'n Marty figure we could pull this rescue thing off our own way."

"So you may think, my boys, but would you care to know what you are up against?"

"Shoot," said Alex.

"We're all ears.  Been waitin' since last night." Marty took hold of his last taco and folded one end of it.  "Just remember what we said before, Sydney Dude: Where there's a will, there's a way."  Daintily holding the taco by the folded end, Marty took a big bite and smiled as he chewed.

 


Wednesday, July 11, 2001

Installment #11

--Lost to the Revolution

With a sly smile, Sydney pointed the stem of his pipe toward Alex and Marty.  "Well, there you have it boys.  Antulio has offered you a position in his organization.  But I'm afraid that what I'm proposing for you in the way of stepping aboard another canoe and heading up the Vaupés to collect plant specimens is nothing quite so romantic and daring . . . " he lifted his pipe to his mouth, struck a lighter and puffed, ". . . not to mention socially progressive." He puffed again.  "So, I wonder.  Have I lost you to the Revolution?"

Turning toward Marty, Alex found his attention taken by Violetta whose hand was about halfway up his buddy's thigh.  "Marty?  What do you say?"

"Oh, well I don't know, uh . . . what do you think, Alex?'

"Dude?"  He smiled grimly to see Marty's attention return to his preferred interest.  "Okay, well . . . what I think is like, hey!  You know?  I can see where a person might want to smoke a cigar and not be bugged about it and all, but . . . "

Violetta's gaze was steady upon him.  "But?"

"Well, to tell the truth, me 'n Marty don't smoke cigars."

Antulio's eyes rolled.  "Chinga madre."

"But hey!  Different strokes for different folks is what me n' Marty always say.  Right Moon Man?"

"Well, sure.  What else?"

"I mean, me 'n Marty, we like a nice fat doobie in our bong as much as the next man, so what's good for the goose is good for the gander and that . . . is . . . like, what I'm saying, if you know what I mean."

Sydney's brows were in a tight knit.  "What's a 'doobie'?"

"*Un cigaro de marihuana*," said Antulio with extreme prejudice.

"Oh, stop!"  Violetta raised her hand from Marty's leg. "This isn't just about what people smoke! This is a fight, a war for cultural and political integrity."  The sardonic turn to the woman's mouth had deepened.

"Yeah," said Marty.  "C'mon Alex.  Let's get real, okay?"

"Well hey!  I can dig it," said Alex.  "I'm just trying to say that, okay, forget what somebody might want to smoke . . . "

"No, we don't forget that."  With his teeth, Antulio rolled the cigar to the other side of his mouth. "It is one serious part of a much larger picture about creeping fascism in the world."

"Sure.  I'm hip, but . . . "  Alex paused eyeing Sydney who had motioned to a waiter and was now pointing at the drinks around the table for another round.  When the waiter had nodded and walked away, Alex said, "It's just that me n' Marty are totally, like, non-violent, you know."?

Marty nodded.  "We are opposed to violence against anything, including cows, pigs, sheeps and chicken, and we don't even wear leather shoes."  He raised his vinyl tennis shoe from the floor.  "See?"

"So!"  Violetta let her eyes burn into Alex.  "What you did here just a little while ago was an example of your nonviolence?"

Marty smiled.  "You didn't see Alex hit the guy, didya?"

Violetta's voice came up nearly to a shriek.  "He was fighting!"

"No."  Alex shook his head.  "I stopped a fight."

"Alex took hold of that dude and gave him a big bear hug until he was calmed down is all."

"Pah!"  A cloud of smoke billowed across the table to Marty.  "He was choking the man with an arm about his neck.  We are not blind!"

"We always let the person go before he passes out."  Alex picked up the bottle of beer which the waiter had set down before him.  "We never hurt anybody.  We just stop them from hurting others or themselves."

"That's our way," said Marty.

Violetta flipped a hand toward Marty's face causing him to flinch. "We could never wage a Revolution in your way!"

Antulio took his cigar from his mouth and looked at it.  "Let me ask you:  are you aware that one of your Gringas is presently serving a life sentence in a Peruvian prison, for nothing more serious than associating with people like Violetta and I?"

Marty looked toward Alex; Alex looked back at Marty.  "Well?" Violetta nudged Marty.

He shook his head.  "No, we had no idea."

"Peru is not even her own country."  She poked her finger on Marty's shoulder. "And yet she has been convicted of treason." She grimaced to see Marty pull back from her in shock.

"Sound like justice to you?"  Antulio bit his cigar, as both boys looked to him, their eyes looking for the answer.  "Of course it isn't, for it is impossible to be guilty of treason in any country but your own.  So now tell me: As Gringos, don't you think you owe this compatriot of yours something?  Will you just sit by here, collecting your little plants with our friend Sydney while she rots in prison for the rest of her life, when perhaps there is something you could do?"

"Us? Like, how?"  Marty turned to Violetta.

"You could break her out."  She watched Marty's eyes widen.

Alex whistled under his breath, shaking his head.

"You see?  Here is a violent fight going on that you should stop. Someone of your own country has been kidnapped.  Now, tell me how you can stop this act of violence against this woman by your all so very moral means of nonviolence?"

"Now that is quite a question."  Sydney having poured some red wine in his glass, set the bottle back down.  "I too would like to hear the answer to that."

"Where there's a will, there's a way," said Alex.

"No more of these cloying cliches of yours, O Brave One." Violetta smiled most sardonically.  "Let's have an answer!"

Alex shrugged.  "I mean what I say, but if you would like it a little shorter and sweeter, then let me put it like this:  The Will *is* the way."

Antulio growled.  "Mystics!"

Violetta nodded. "I believe he is smoking too many of his . . . how you say, 'doobies'."

"Too damned few just of late, if you ask me," said Alex.

Marty grinned. "No two ways about that."

Violetta shrugged.  "You want some marihuana, we'll get you all of the finest Colombian as you may like.  Ask, and it is given."

Antulio smiled grimly. "And when you have smoked some, perhaps then you will become sufficiently mystical as to be able to think of a way to save Melissa Brenson from her Peruvian dungeon?"

"Me 'n Marty have thought of some pretty far out things after a few tokes off the old bong."  Alex nodded, giving affirmation to his own thought.  "Shoot. Only a few months ago, when it came to thinking of a way to get down here to the rain forest to save the trees, well, would you believe that . . . "

"No, Toker." He watched his friend's eyes turn to his own. "Forget it.  They will never believe us."

Alex nodded. "Right."

"Tell us!"  Violetta pushed on Marty's arm.

"Score some of that primo Colombian weed you're talking about and then we'll tell you."

"Not just that," said Alex. "When we've run this idea through the bong a time or two, and we got this chick they be talkin' about out of that black hole of Calcutta up there, and she's sittin' right here at this table, then maybe they'll believe us about Rudolf."

"Yeah," said Marty.  "But not until."

Alex nodded.  "You got that right."

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