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Friday, May 08, 2009

More Poems Written With ESL Students

These are "Lantern" poems - syllables per line go 1, 2, 3, 4, 1

Sun
Feels hot
On my face
It feels like love -
Blush!
(by Sandra & Me)


Sky
Big blue
Today the sun
Shines!
(by Lilianna & me)


Dogs
Jumping around
Barking, running –
Woof!
(by Sandra & me)


Far
Family
In Mexico
Hard to be here
Solo
(Liliana & me)


Night
Darkness
Full moon shines
Making me feel
High
(by Lilliana & me)


The following is a poem made of a bunch of Lantern poems with a Mother's Day theme, suggested by Sandra, but mostly written by me:


“Thanks”

Mom
You are
Always there
For me when I’m
Sad

Mom
You are
Always there
For me when I
Cry

Mom
You are
Always there
For me when I
Win

Mom
Don’t know
What I’d do
If you were not
There



Thursday, May 07, 2009

Two Haiku Written With ESL Students

Lovers send roses
If I am careful enough
They will not draw blood


Fall leaves prophetic
Like the snow that will follow
They foretell winter


Friday, April 17, 2009

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Tuesday, October 11, 2005

Currently Reading
The Last Kingdom
By Bernard Cornwell
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Life's Crazy Engine

fate is everything
the women spinning this web
make what they want of us
and leave us full of wonder

it begins and ends with running
i run everyday as bare to this world as i can
interaction and contact with the earth mother
is what my bare feet crave

these footfalls get engtangled with connections known and unknown
those i love and run alongside speak to me directly
those i pass and who pass me connect differently
they either speak nonsense or they discharge like lightning

thirty years of running
are the breadcrumbs of my life
i can follow them back to the beginning
when there was wonder and growing and escape

even then there were two things that pulled me to her
her eyes and her voice
they had subtle depth and hidden mystery
like doors left open to a forbidden sanctuary

to look into those eyes was to be pulled in -
no wonder she wore glasses, for they protected us -
and her voice spoke like many at once
every songlike syllable crafted to say o so much more than was being said

now i understand the myth of the sirens
now i understand the devil's name is legion
to hear her voice again is to be pulled in
or willingly we jump


Saturday, September 18, 2004

Currently Reading
Chris Carmichael's Food for Fitness
By Chris Carmichael, Jim Rutberg, Kathy Zawadzki
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GRASS

There is a section of grass in Green Brook Park that is so soft and cool
when you run on it in bare feet
that you could be attracted to it and be addicted to it
like a drink or a drug or a lover
and run on it over and over.
 
Yesterday I ws doing that
and a deer saw me and watched me for a while.
He was a medium buck with about 5 points on his rack.
I wonder what he was thinking about this running human
barefoot and shirtless running over the cool soft grass and smiling.
 
I guess it spooked him
because he took off towards the Green Brook
flying over the grass and the overgrown weedy bushes that line the running water.
And this is what I was thinking:
Was I invading his space, or was he invading mine?



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