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Original: 6/28/2008 5:23 PM
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Saturday, June 28, 2008
 

this could be it

swizzle sticks
combinations world-likeness to a whirlwind
catastrophic in the sense that it all makes sense
drop the pen
i think i let the masses win
i think my writing career is over
goodbye
the end.
 Posted 6/28/2008 5:23 PM - 22 views - 2 comments

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swizzle sticks. what a good start for a poem. i have some penguin swizzle sticks. and there is your daily Rhi factoid/comment ;)
Posted 6/29/2008 11:22 PM by fallingingreen Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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i like the likeness to a whirlwind and the image of it all making sense. and saddened that with pen dropped there could be an end . i'm left to cry out damned the masses pick up the pen carry on never stop til you say when.. oh this is just too good, kinda stirs a reaction. so very well written!:) peace. stickmann
Posted 7/12/2008 12:23 PM by jstickmann - reply


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