Story ideas, Please read

1928 trilogy (shortish stories)

1 untitled (Childhood)
This wille about a young boy, growing up on a farm with two other kids, a gir whom he cares about deeply and a older guy who gets them in trouble all the time, it is set along time ago. Based on a timeline of events causing him to decide to go to war.

2 Untitled (training)
Same young boy growing up. First scene is set at the party for all the young men who are setting off to war training. At army camp he sends letters to the girl, and gets left out of the group and stuff like that. Also has some scenes of the girl who halfway through finds another guy to care for her, but continues sending letters, these is set on her trying to keep her two lifes apart

3. Skies
The main guy returns home after cometing his training to discover her with the other man. With a broken heart he sets of and signs up to go on the next availabile mission with the airforce. However the mission is withdrawn at the last minute after the discovery of the captains un-appropriate conduct in earlier missions. Also has scenes of the captain and this he did (killing innocents sacraficing others dissobeying orders and stuff like that, he was into alot off sick things....rather unpleasent person i guess is the general theme of these Brackets)


Unwritten histories trilogy
Just like the title it is unwritten, but its going to be another look at the nazi's. From different sides of the war, showing that everyone is evil, and that jews are like devil moster t ings, (which there isnt, i am not saying anything about anyone, the words jew and nazi wont even be in the story, but thats the general idea, there will be absolutly no fact in it at all its just a story, dont bash me, please)


Angel single story

A deformed child found at a church in a little town was disowned by its occupants claiming it was a demon, however the priest took him in. Long forgotten to be a person the child became a simple servant of the church. He occupied the confession box when the priest was away which is where he met a girl. In time they fell inlove, but having being ugly the boy never let her see him. (btw the kid was beaten and stuff by the priest) one day the priest came back while the boy was waiting for the girl who never showed sounding angery so the boy hid in a cupboard near the alter where he saw the priest lay down the girl and rape her till she died. In a burst of anger the boys Back rips open to show a bloody set of wings. He then kills the priest and carries the girl out of the burning church (yes its burning). The townsfolk decide they were wrong and that the boys an angel and the priest was a devil worshiper who wanted to control the angel. Years later the angels in the woods with the kids when her hears screams and sees fire so he runs to the town which was runover by bandits, he kills a few baddies and runs back to the kids because everyone in the town had been killed and hung out of their burning houses. The kids had all been decapitated, so the angel goes crazie and rips of one of his wings, dislocating his arm, and then breaks the other in half and walks away


I might write more of that charictor later if i get insperation

I also have one other set coming of three unrelated stories.
A dark Scifi about a war that doesnt exist
A romance possably between a jew and a nazi or something like that
And the other isnt done yet



If you have any suggestions or ideas or anything at all, ill be happy =D

Dear diary,

Today everything sucked, the world hates me, people just dont understand my complicated feelings,

your the only person that understands me, your my best friend

 

err... kidding, this is such an emo thing to do by i guess its ok, even though i said i would never do it, but i guess i am

Anyway, hey guys, what few will see this, iono really what to say but as time goes by i will be writing a number of stories and other similar things, so if you would care to read them and see what you think because to get good i guess critisism and practise is the only way.

also if you havent noticed the anime in the backgrounds is ouran host club

-Paul,

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