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Original: 2/11/2008 1:04 AM
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Monday, February 11, 2008
 

is it in my head?
the rhythm of your breath (demanding) against my chest?
did you leave some imprint?
a negative?
(quick, now look at a white wall
holy shit it's jesus h.)
or is it real?
did i carry your breath with me?
(what's that word again-
synchronicity?)
maybe something got fuzzy with the quanta
between you and me
mayhaps we're entangled
i wouldn't be surprised
not with your eyes
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Huge Props!
this is absolutely amazing.
Posted 2/11/2008 3:10 PM by disasteriffick - reply

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Oh wow, xanga. I like your poem. I actually understand it.
Posted 3/2/2008 12:21 AM by auburnrose89 - reply


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