in my peach party dress, no one dared, no one cared to tell me where the pretty girls are. those demigods...[with their nine inch nails and little fascist panties tucked inside the heart of every nice girl]
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Sunday, November 07, 2004
 

black widows that bite her skin
on the hand that melts the m&ms
touches him while she prays
teeth clentched
she's his hosannah girl
and he's in for it

sugar cane kisses
are stolen in the night
she swallows them whole
afraid they'll rot before their time
she stores them away in her memory
[let's hope her memory doesn't fail her]

she sees life as a black and white photo
corners bent
she misses his body
and the tossing and turning doesn't bring a remedy
like a slow motion film
she reminisces
of each time he doused her in love

to him she's Venus herself
even that her jealousy covers her beauty like a black veil
maybe her radiance can shine through
or could it maybe be too thick?

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Brit, your poems make me melt.
Posted 11/8/2004 10:39 AM by champaigne_high - reply

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that was profound...I don't think I have written anything so deep.

You know, I just missed seeing you at the SATs on Saturday. I was talking to Jason Weeber (so I was in the wrong half of the alphabet line) and he mentioned that you were over there, so I looked, but you had just gone in. Then I went over to the correct line, and waited...and waited...but by the time I got into the auditorium- you were gone. Alas, such is the story of my life.
How do you think you did? I'm feeling much better about it this time around.
I also had a most curious dream about you last night, but I'm not sure what brought that on.
Ciao for now,
Gregory
Posted 11/8/2004 7:02 PM by DrLuv87 - reply

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P.S. Have you been enjoying the crisp, Fall air this season?
Posted 11/8/2004 7:04 PM by DrLuv87 - reply

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you write long ass poems...haha but they're cute!! wonder who you got that skill from:) haha so how's your senior year goin?? hell yea SENIOR!!!
Posted 11/8/2004 7:42 PM by bootsy17 - reply

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ahh i love you update please
Posted 11/10/2004 6:09 PM by Lynnsey_rae - reply

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Hmm Britt, may I ask, could I take this poem and set it to music? I have a composition that must be set to a poem due within the month. Your approval would be highly appreciated.

It's a great poem by-the-way. Otherwise I would've never asked for it.

Talk to me some time, you're the spiffinest.

-Josh
Posted 11/11/2004 7:45 PM by Jeuice - reply

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dear britt,

i just wanted you to know that i <3 you. and i hope school is going well for you.

<3 can we please play when i get home?

k thanx,

<3 heidi

Posted 2/5/2006 6:59 PM by joiland - reply

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ps you deleted your whole xanga! we were gonna make a book!

Posted 2/22/2006 5:54 PM by Lynnsey_rae - reply

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I LOVE YOU! haha its been forever dear old xanga
Posted 4/3/2007 11:38 PM by Lynnsey_rae - reply

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Hey peachpartydress,

I read your post and wanted to say hiYou have 1,000 credits, add a Mini! (?). It would be great if you visited my page and say hi sometime.

wow

If you have the chance check out my page.

Have a good day! =) Enrin

Posted 2/11/2008 5:27 AM by sarahbeen23 - reply


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