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Original: 10/19/2006 8:23 PM
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Thursday, October 19, 2006
 

Ok.  Edgar (our music pastor) went on and on after our recording session about God giving many of us songs to praise him.  It spurred me on because about 18 months ago, He gave me the beginning of a song.  I've finally finished it and am putting it out for comments.  Now, the only problem with doing this is that you can't hear the tune - think minor key.  For that, you'll just have to wait to see me.  Then I'll sing it to you!  I'm not real sure about the last verse; to be more specific about the first two stanzas of the last verse.  And I'm not really sure if it's totally finished.  But here it is.

Jill is a dancer and Ian is gay.

They live in a city not to far away

From a church where the chosen sing and pray

They're looking for heaven, where God's love is real

 

Hungry for Jesus, the search through the streets

In the arms of a lover or a stranger they meet

But the sweel love of Jesus is the touch that they need

They're looking for heaven, where God's love is real

 

Why are they searching still

Where can they turn

Why don't we share the love

That our Savior has shown?

 

We'll open all the doors, we'll tear down the bars.

W'll take Christ into the world, we'll go where they are.

No more a citadel where the chosen ones stay

They'll find here a heaven where God's love is real.

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Wow - I love it.  So, so true!  You'll have to sing it to me at QuizFest.  :)
Posted 10/19/2006 8:55 PM by jesusfreak618 - reply

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I like it. Christianity would gain a lot if more churches put that into practice.
Posted 10/20/2006 3:32 AM by B_Marclar - reply

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It's an awesome message... I might like to see a few more explicit references to Ian and Jill through the rest of the song, but that's not necessarily a criticism.
Posted 10/20/2006 12:30 PM by paleolithnick Xanga Premium Member - reply

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wonderful!! !made me cry! not kidding! I love you mommy a
Posted 10/22/2006 11:33 PM by whitniboo - reply


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