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Original: 4/26/2005 5:27 PM
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Tuesday, April 26, 2005

 

and heres a poem i wrote in english. i wrote it in 15 min. thats why its kinda crappy.

                             

Bad day at school

 

You wake up to start the day,

You already know,

It wont end your way.

You get on the bus,

It stops for a train,

Will the ride end?

It’s starting to rain.

The bus pulls into school,

Dirt turns to mud,

You wore your good shoes,

And now there just crud.

In your first class,

You forgot your pen,

Nothing to write with,

When will it end?

You jack a pencil,

From the desk,

The teacher saw you,

Man she’s a pest.

Lunchtime now,

The chicken is cold,

The bread is moldy,

And the milk is old.

Fifth hour now,

With old man Valdez,

 I slept in his class,

Well you know the rest.

I got a detention,

The teacher wasn’t nice,

I was talking too loud,

Now it’s a day in ice.

I go to the ice room,

I sit in my seat,

Trying to stay awake,

Is a great feat.

Last hour now,

Were in the home stretch,

They let me back to class,

Its intro to tech.

I get my white shirt dirty,

Its beond repair,

I want to go home,

With some leisure to spare.

I get on the bus,

It’s the same old scene,

All the kids are making fun,

Geeze they are mean.

I walk in the door,

“how was your day?”

“very good, mother,”

I wearily say.

I go to my room,

Such a bad day,

I go to bed knowing,

                                         Ill do it all again, the very next day.

                              

 Posted 4/26/2005 5:27 PM - 1 view - 14 comments

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that's really really good, Jon... i'm impressed... :)
Posted 4/26/2005 6:16 PM by Beth719 - reply

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Hey my xanga is bamy_chic...ok know i love you...i love your poem too

love always mickey

Posted 4/26/2005 6:20 PM by bamy_chic - reply

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thanks

Posted 4/26/2005 6:21 PM by stoopid_guitarist - reply

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Ahhhh thats good. I feel like that everyday.
Posted 4/26/2005 6:25 PM by CuteLittleBlondie - reply

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wut up foo? i think either this sunday (5-1-05) will do, like sometime in the afternoon

Peace and Love,

~~~~Ben~~~~

Posted 4/26/2005 6:32 PM by Big_Balloo - reply

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trust me hannah said she'll help me get a layout....so yeah...well i'll ttul luv ya

mickey

Posted 4/26/2005 7:39 PM by bamy_chic - reply

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well i picked out this one and yeah...well i gtg and yeah....later luv ya

mickey

Posted 4/26/2005 8:07 PM by bamy_chic - reply

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hey wassup? this is hannah...koolio xanga...well gtg later

Banana

Posted 4/26/2005 8:16 PM by dorynerd_14 - reply

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dude.................... awesome poem
Posted 4/26/2005 8:17 PM by dorynerd_14 - reply

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for realz..and i dont know how to fix it cuz im too mentally challenged.....but owell lifes a bitch anywayz.....and yeah....well gtg later

hannah

Posted 4/26/2005 11:01 PM by dorynerd_14 - reply

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dude what possessed you to get a stitch layout? well its cool though. ..for some reason stitch kind of looks like you....jk....well gtg later

banana

Posted 4/27/2005 10:14 PM by dorynerd_14 - reply

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Hey i like ur bakground it reminds me of u in a cute way,well u made me laugh today anyway,gtg love you bunches

mickey

Posted 4/27/2005 10:48 PM by bamy_chic - reply

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dude promise youll show up to my funeral cause like from what happened at hte community service project.....we were almost drag racing and cpt was losing ...and so we called him up on his cel and called him a loser and yeah...and tomorrow we have his class and yeah...well later

banana

Posted 4/27/2005 11:02 PM by dorynerd_14 - reply

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dont worry you wont have to go to a funeral...cpt didn't even say anything about it so yeah...well later

banana

Posted 4/28/2005 4:57 PM by dorynerd_14 - reply


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