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Saturday, September 01, 2007
 

A Moment In Time

Looking back over some of the Kween_of_the_Queens past challenges, I see several that I had not responded to for one reason or another. One that caught my eye goes back to January 2006. It was entitled "A Moment In Time," and readers were challenged to recall a single moment in their lives and describe that moment and what they were feeling. The first thing that came to my mind was a moment that will remain with me for as long as I live.

It was in the fall, Autumn actually, of 1979, about 7 o'clock in the morning. I was on my way to work dressed in a cream colored business suit, when I suddenly stopped in the courtyard between the front door and my car. The morning air was not cold, or even crisp, but there was a mild breeze that gently caressed my legs while my skirt swayed ever so slightly with the occassional gust of wind. There wasn't a cloud in the sky.

Suddenly I was aware, as if for the first time, of the leaves as they moved across the sidewalk and of the early morning birds singing as they began their day. And for some strange reason, whether it was a trick of the morning light or a trick of the mind I can not say, I was aware of a seemingly heightened sense of sight. My awareness of shadow and light was so much more than it usually was, making everything I looked at stand out in relief, having the appearance of a close up view and a view from a distance both at the same time. I saw sharper edges at the borders of buildings and individual bricks and of the leaves in the trees, and I seemed to be able to see at least one or two layers below the surface of those leaves to view the very veins that carried their nourishment, and I seemed to see the individual grains of sand that went into making each brick that formed the walls of the building that I had just left, and the individual strands (bits? pieces? shafts?) of fur on the Squirrel that had just perched itself on a tree limb some 30 to 50 feet away.

And in my mind, it seemed that I could sense the presence of a greater cosmic wonder than I had ever before known, and I felt like I was a complete and integrated part of that greater whole. It was a moment when I felt completely at home and at peace with the universe. It was a moment of wonder, as when the world was fresh and new. Oh how I wish I could have stayed in that moment.
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and a powerful moment it must have been...
Posted 9/1/2007 5:52 AM by Leonidas Xanga True Member Xanga Lifetime Member - reply

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When I was a freshman in college, I took a walk and was making my way into a wooded area through lite underbrush and closely spaced, small trees when I has a similar moment. All my senses were heightened and I became very aware of God's presence.

That was the year I became a Christian but I am pretty sure it happened before I turned my life over to God.
Posted 9/1/2007 6:40 AM by EyeHatePeas - reply

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your mentioning of the leaves "sweeping across the sidewalk" and an incredible feeling sweeping over you draws my thoughts back to the movie American Beauty.  loved that movie.  So aesthetic.
Posted 9/1/2007 11:57 AM by PacifismPlease Xanga True Member - reply

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MiLady,

This is a wonderful entry that you have successfully brought to my minds eye!  I love it.  What a grand moment of comune with God and the earth it must have been!  Brilliantly written!  Thank you so much for this entry!  You have been *Starred* and linked.~Kween

Posted 9/1/2007 12:45 PM by Kween_of_the_Queens - reply

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I had similar moments when I worked on a golf course.  Something about nature early in the morning is truly magical.
Posted 9/1/2007 4:00 PM by perseyownz - reply

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Enjoyed this...just wandering through xanga...and in August 1979, I was 3 months old.  ;)
Posted 9/1/2007 5:06 PM by gwennieg - reply

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absolutely lovely... fantastic post!
Posted 9/1/2007 6:34 PM by madamzephyrus - reply

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Yes, those are the moments that leave our souls longing for more. Oh and in 1979 I was a senior in high school.
Hugs, Tricia
Posted 9/1/2007 7:17 PM by pray14me Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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Beautiful!
Posted 9/3/2007 3:41 PM by apennieformythoughts Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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I could just about picture the whole scene in my minds eye...this was good...and in that year I lived with my great aunt and had a 9 year old son...Smile
Posted 9/3/2007 4:36 PM by m_elmer_48 Xanga Lifetime Member - reply

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Wow. How cool is that. THanks for sharing!
Posted 9/6/2007 8:45 PM by Queenelizzy Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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What an awesome moment. And such a vivid description, I felt like I was there with you. Thanks!
Posted 9/7/2007 12:23 AM by azcason Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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Great post...such beautiful descriptions.
Posted 9/8/2007 1:22 AM by Stacy74 - reply

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Wow..... This is beautiful... The description is wonderful. I'm there with you & I can feel it too..... Amazing. peace
Posted 9/13/2007 11:22 PM by peacenow - reply


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