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Original: 5/13/2007 4:56 PM
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Sunday, May 13, 2007
 

TITLE IDEAS?

This is a new song for which I am excited!  First one in months!!!

 

Please, all of you, do me the honor of suggesting a title.


God Bless,
D.

 

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I shouldn’t have touched that

Though I like it very much

Though it’s pleasant to the touch

It eventually will cut

To my marrow, to my gut


I shouldn’t have stared at that

Though it’s easy on the eyes

I’ll eventually go blind

When I can’t tell you wrong from right

When I can’t tell you dark from light


I shouldn’t have tasted that

Though it’s candied and it’s sweet

There’s a switchblade underneath

And I can feel it draining me

Till there’s no more blood to bleed


I shouldn’t have loved that

Though I thought I’d feel free

I’ve got shackles on my feet

And they’ve gone and lost the key

Likely as they’ll do to me

 

You can salvage me

 Posted 5/13/2007 4:56 PM - 5 comments

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I have many ideas for titles...however, who am I to say anything?

Cheers,

Tabb
Posted 5/13/2007 9:22 PM by NotreAventure - reply

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back in the day, Derek Halet would have gone with the most obvious option:

"I Shouldn't Have"

but I'm glad to see you're denying the impulse these days, love.

But I picked up on that whole "switchblade" movie reference, and I think you know that means you have no other option than naming this song, "Billy Bob Thorton Shouldn't Have".

(oh my gosh i love you crazy, let's go out to tea and take over the world.)

p.s. tonight i found an old tape cassette that was unmarked, and it turned out to be the first draft recordings we did in my room of your Album 1 classics in the making. it made me smile like you smiled that time in the kitchen the other week when i looked like i did when i was 15.)

Posted 5/14/2007 2:15 AM by therewillbeglad - reply

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check your message.
Posted 5/14/2007 12:11 PM by TheWendyBird Xanga True Member - reply

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you always say that about my mom.
Posted 5/14/2007 3:44 PM by therewillbeglad - reply

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is she a believer?
Posted 5/18/2007 3:41 PM by gideonrecon Xanga True Member - reply


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